Recent Comments

Anonymous
7/25/17, 9:24 AM
This is excellent. Though it does worry me a bit since death kind of suggest STDs. I really like the pacing and descriptive words. The small details and adjectives really make reading this so enjoyable. For the story, I love the amiability and the steady relationships/interactions. It feels transparent (in the good way) and genuine because of the depth and complexity. (I was really surprise that the "bad guy" doesn't feel like a bad guy. If I were in Daniel's shoe, I wouldn't even mind it if John becomes evil, through a series of "nice" deceptions. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
zefrog3@Yahoo.com
7/25/17, 9:21 AM
love it, would love to see more of these types of stories.
Anonymous
7/25/17, 8:47 AM
loving this!!!
Anonymous
7/25/17, 8:12 AM
I love your work! I would def love to read more sci-fi/parasite from you. Though I hope you write more about what the parasite does to the men like in the lost cave series instead of creating new characters to infect. Can't wait!
7/25/17, 6:10 AM
I'm still enjoying this a ton. Thanks for writing Webb! Hot as always.
Anonymous
7/25/17, 6:02 AM
Love me a mindless,horny lawyer More please
Anonymous
7/25/17, 5:51 AM
I'm onboard. I always liked your stuff on the old evolution forum. The style and pace of this are nice. I'm looking forward to some reality warping, hopefully.
Anonymous
7/25/17, 5:01 AM
As much as I want to see this continue, I understand it could be straining. Perhaps I can continue the story (or theme) in a "fan fiction" of this one.
Andrew
7/25/17, 5:01 AM
Yup already making sure to double check next time!
Anonymous
7/25/17, 4:27 AM
Shame. Last chapter was stellar. Nice work
Anonymous
7/25/17, 4:14 AM
Story is great. Good substance. Form sucked -- spell and grammar check. Writing is easy. It's the editing that takes a lot of time. Spend the time. Your readers will appreciate the story more.
Willie Cici
7/25/17, 4:10 AM
This has great potential! I'm intrigued. Can't wait for next chapter.
Jul 23, 2017
Anonymous
7/25/17, 4:06 AM
Best story in a while? You must not read Willie's stuff. His stories always pack a punch. Keep at it, Willie. Loved it.
Anonymous
7/25/17, 4:04 AM
I hate to say this, but these twists are getting annoying. It's like an endless power struggle revenge fantasy, more creepy or unsettling than sexy. I really hope these stop.
SkyWing
7/25/17, 4:01 AM
Awww, poor Bieber master, who's name I've long forgotten. As much as I love puppy play and feralification, I'd rather it be on ginger and his apparently sadistic mind than the nicer jock. >.>
7/25/17, 3:58 AM
I'm normally not into stories with cock cages, but this is super hot! I especially love all the "one of us" stuff with Lars. Can't wait for Chapter 3!
Anonymous
7/25/17, 2:43 AM
Awww don't end it there... keep writing!!!
Anonymous
7/25/17, 2:39 AM
awe you can't end it hear, i need to know what happens i really hope master gingers gets his comeuppance
Anonymous
7/25/17, 2:29 AM
love it
Anonymous
7/25/17, 2:09 AM
I came so hard, thank you
Anonymous
7/25/17, 2:03 AM
Great job, thank you. Looking forward to reading more from you
7/25/17, 1:33 AM
Please continue!
Redbird
7/25/17, 1:31 AM
I loved it. I has good pacing and great character devolpment.I like tour descriptions of your characters too.
andrew
7/25/17, 1:04 AM
Figured it out. I had written that it was a part of a series called Muscle Milk
7/25/17, 12:34 AM
Yea I have no idea. I was like THATS MINE! Hahaha. I guess it's cause there's another story with the same name.
Anonymous
7/25/17, 12:32 AM
How is it possible?
Anonymous
7/24/17, 11:57 PM
If you mean by style, mystery? setting? so far it reminds me of something out of Harry Potter, so i like, and the intrigue of where it will go? and has a timeless feel? I like the opening vulnerability of the shop keeper John and patron, Danny. Danny, let me get the kettle going sounds gaelic or irish so again, timelessness, ageless, inviting, , I like the slow subtle, easy, warm start
Anonymous
7/24/17, 11:16 PM
why is this story linked to that of another author??
7/24/17, 10:38 PM
Great story!
Andrew
7/24/17, 8:20 PM
For sure! Thank you for the feedback! I will make sure to do a better grammar check and spelling check :). I know how that ruin the story sometimes