Recent Comments

Jul 28, 2017
7/29/17, 3:26 AM
Just a heads-up to the people leaving negative, hectoring comments on LoakaChunk's stories: you couldn't supply a worse advertisement for "healthy lifestyles" if you tried.
Jul 28, 2017
Anonymous
7/29/17, 3:13 AM
What a cluster fuck these comments turned out to be!
Jul 28, 2017
Anonymous
7/29/17, 2:53 AM
I'm also attracted to healthy people that are real. No one wants to read erotica about a sick obese person It's sad
Jul 28, 2017
Anonymous
7/29/17, 2:26 AM
"Maybe some people like the muscle guys because it's normal to be attracted to healthy people." Stupidest thing I've read all day. How pretentious to you have to be to imply that you're better than other people just because the completely fictional people you're attracted to are 'healthier'? News flash, nobody know why people have the kinks they do, but it sure as hell doesn't have to do with being attracted to people's 'health'.
7/29/17, 1:52 AM
Thanks for the mention, Viridian! Appreciate that. As I posted the other day, I'm not expecting to post any new stories here unless irresistible inspiration strikes, but hopefully I've left behind a decent body of work for people to enjoy.
Jul 28, 2017
Anonymous
7/29/17, 1:49 AM
Write what you wish to write, you can't please everyone's kinks.
Jul 28, 2017
Anonymous
7/29/17, 1:34 AM
Maybe some people like the muscle guys because it's normal to be attracted to healthy people.
Jul 28, 2017
Anonymous
7/29/17, 12:25 AM
LoakaChunk ... keep writing and publishing what you like. your detractors can fuck off.
Jul 28, 2017
Anonymous
7/29/17, 12:24 AM
all you bashing this story just need to shut the fuck up ... you all want to get off on a stereotype ...some clueless balloon animal musclehead twink. this guy as every right to write and publish what he wants. if you dont like it, dont read it. its not rocket science. i personally am getting a bit bored with the balloon animal musclehead crap.
Anonymous
7/28/17, 11:59 PM
Hot! I hope they regress him mentally and put him in diapers!
7/28/17, 11:54 PM
Are the changed men mentioned in the story actual stories you have written or might write? They sound really hot too!
Jul 28, 2017
Anonymous
7/28/17, 11:48 PM
I never said they were worse Most of the things in the stories on this site don't happen because either It involves magic/tech that doesn't exist Or it involves things that most sane people would never do to another person This author pushes a constant narrative of fat fetishism which has consequences that will be more likely to affect readers than a rape fantasy.
Jul 28, 2017
Anonymous
7/28/17, 10:32 PM
This is insane! It's fantasy! And to say that the stories with exercise are somehow better is ridiculous. Is the story where a man is kidnapped, raped, changed against his will, mentally drained, and race changed also better as long as he doesn't approve of being overweight? Come on, everyone on this sight has a few hang ups or we probably wouldn't be here. But how can you possibly think a fat fetish is somehow worse than kidnapping and rape as long as the guy also exercises???
7/28/17, 9:51 PM
Loved it! I hope he changes more men!
Anonymous
7/28/17, 9:21 PM
more please!!
7/28/17, 8:59 PM
To the above commenter: Try Cris Kane's stories? Plenty of well-written feel good sweetness in many of them.
Anonymous
7/28/17, 8:54 PM
It would only be unfair if neither of them gets Manuel's power Otherwise I like where this is going
Jul 28, 2017
Anonymous
7/28/17, 8:29 PM
Did anyone say anything about the other extreme being a good? No they didn't. But a lot of those stories you're talking about at least have the characters engaging in healthy activities like exercising This story literally has someone hypnotising a sick person into being happy with his unhealthy and obese body
Jul 28, 2017
Peircedskin
7/28/17, 8:25 PM
I enjoyed it. We all have our fetishes and we write for them. I love a fat guy over a muscle guy every time. Bald, hairy, big belly, all turn ons for me. Add some tattoos and piercings and I'll suck you till my jaw cracks. Owning your weight or characteristics not generally accepted by the general gay community is an attractive feature in a man. This story isn't even a horror story like most on here. It is a sweet story about getting a man to accept he's desirable and enjoying his size instead of hiding away and living his life lonely and miserable.
Jul 28, 2017
Anonymous
7/28/17, 8:24 PM
Body Dysmorphic Disorder is something that can and does happen in real life, and yet hyper muscled and unhealthy bodies are written about on here all the time and no one, says beep(because you know they're reasonable and understand its fantasy), wheres the outrage there, if you're really concerned for peoples health? Bodybuilders are often extremely unhealthy, especially during a competition, where they deprive themselves of food and water all in the name of making their bodies 'pop'. Seriously, this is a site for fantasy writing, why get so judgmental and holier than thou just because a particular story tickles a nerve with you.
Jul 28, 2017
Anonymous
7/28/17, 7:14 PM
No one ever said they dont deserve love or whatever...so stop projecting. And the thing about a lot of the erotica on here is that it can't happen in real life Obesity is a medical issues that needs to be dealt with...not encouraged and fetishised.
Anonymous
7/28/17, 7:09 PM
Please continue. It is so great. I love all of the humiliation of the Masters. I would love to see Bieber become a pup. You are so creative.
Jul 28, 2017
Anonymous
7/28/17, 6:27 PM
What I gather from some of these comments is that they don't believe that fat, chubby, or outright obese people exist. That they don't deserve love, attention, or even tolerance. Not everyone has the time or money to dedicate to the gym. On the flip side, don't you understand that most fat people really do try to lose weight? That medications, certain health issues, and yes lifestyles are the determining factor as to why they are big to begin with, not everyone is fat because they are lazy. They fact is this story was an active fantasy on a fantasy website written by an author with a valid fetish....look up stat on porn, most searches in porn are chubby chaser, fat, obese, etc. So there is a demand out there. You seem to have an issue with fat, but not about the select few stories that include shit, piss, violence, revenge, etc. Some of you need to look at your priorities and stop judging others.
Jul 28, 2017
Anonymous
7/28/17, 5:44 PM
Not every story can be about some sex deprived twink or jock star.
Jul 28, 2017
Anonymous
7/28/17, 5:44 PM
If you guys think this behavior is limited to the bedroom then you're ignorant.
Jul 28, 2017
Anonymous
7/28/17, 5:34 PM
Can we not treat erotic fiction like its some kind of outcry for social change? Jeeze people, its a story involving someones kinks, not a "Here's how you should live your life guide"
Jul 28, 2017
Anonymous
7/28/17, 5:34 PM
So don't read it if you're not into it, it was clear from the tags...
Jul 28, 2017
Anonymous
7/28/17, 5:25 PM
Body acceptance when co-opted by fat people is just a way for them to not take responsibility for their poor life choices. Stop encouraging this unhealthy lifestyle
Jul 28, 2017
Anonymous
7/28/17, 5:22 PM
I love seeing stories like this. Totally different and fun!
Anonymous
7/28/17, 4:56 PM
Willie From your other stories, I know you hate cops. Now, I know you hate shrinks. Damn!! This was hot and . . .