Recent Comments

Anonymous
7/29/17, 10:41 AM
This would have improved this year's Latitude no end
Anonymous
7/29/17, 9:30 AM
On a quick interesting note, the phrase "brave new world" comes from a famous 1930's dystopian future novel which is related closely George Orwell's 1984 and Ray Bradbury's Fahrenheit 451. It seems a little out of place in the thumbnail for this story.
Rebel
7/29/17, 9:19 AM
Can't wait for the next chapter Keep it up :D
Jul 28, 2017
Anonymous
7/29/17, 9:17 AM
What gets me is there are plenty of other stories on here that feature weight gain in a positive light but you guys don't yell about them. It's only when a story proclaims itself as a "body acceptance" story that you guys start yapping and trolling.
7/29/17, 8:31 AM
So glad you mentioned that--"Making the Band" was one of my inspirations for this story!
Anonymous
7/29/17, 7:26 AM
Excited for this story: Making the Band by DannyDaLionKing is one of my favorite MC stories, and the concept of a hypnotic band reminds me of it. Mass hypnosis scenes/stories will never not be hot
Anonymous
7/29/17, 5:52 AM
Ugh I love this story and hope nothing happens to Tye. I like seeing him in charge and would love to see him add to his family :x
Jul 28, 2017
7/29/17, 5:34 AM
I hope that everyone makes informed decisions regarding their personal health, but that said fantasy is fantasy, so as long as it's not breaking any rules, stories like this belong here.
Kyle
7/29/17, 3:41 AM
Really enjoyed this. Great unexpected side effect and where that could lead. Hope to see you follow the thread.
Jul 28, 2017
7/29/17, 3:26 AM
Just a heads-up to the people leaving negative, hectoring comments on LoakaChunk's stories: you couldn't supply a worse advertisement for "healthy lifestyles" if you tried.
Jul 28, 2017
Anonymous
7/29/17, 3:13 AM
What a cluster fuck these comments turned out to be!
Jul 28, 2017
Anonymous
7/29/17, 2:53 AM
I'm also attracted to healthy people that are real. No one wants to read erotica about a sick obese person It's sad
Jul 28, 2017
Anonymous
7/29/17, 2:26 AM
"Maybe some people like the muscle guys because it's normal to be attracted to healthy people." Stupidest thing I've read all day. How pretentious to you have to be to imply that you're better than other people just because the completely fictional people you're attracted to are 'healthier'? News flash, nobody know why people have the kinks they do, but it sure as hell doesn't have to do with being attracted to people's 'health'.
7/29/17, 1:52 AM
Thanks for the mention, Viridian! Appreciate that. As I posted the other day, I'm not expecting to post any new stories here unless irresistible inspiration strikes, but hopefully I've left behind a decent body of work for people to enjoy.
Jul 28, 2017
Anonymous
7/29/17, 1:49 AM
Write what you wish to write, you can't please everyone's kinks.
Jul 28, 2017
Anonymous
7/29/17, 1:34 AM
Maybe some people like the muscle guys because it's normal to be attracted to healthy people.
Jul 28, 2017
Anonymous
7/29/17, 12:25 AM
LoakaChunk ... keep writing and publishing what you like. your detractors can fuck off.
Jul 28, 2017
Anonymous
7/29/17, 12:24 AM
all you bashing this story just need to shut the fuck up ... you all want to get off on a stereotype ...some clueless balloon animal musclehead twink. this guy as every right to write and publish what he wants. if you dont like it, dont read it. its not rocket science. i personally am getting a bit bored with the balloon animal musclehead crap.
Anonymous
7/28/17, 11:59 PM
Hot! I hope they regress him mentally and put him in diapers!
7/28/17, 11:54 PM
Are the changed men mentioned in the story actual stories you have written or might write? They sound really hot too!
Jul 28, 2017
Anonymous
7/28/17, 11:48 PM
I never said they were worse Most of the things in the stories on this site don't happen because either It involves magic/tech that doesn't exist Or it involves things that most sane people would never do to another person This author pushes a constant narrative of fat fetishism which has consequences that will be more likely to affect readers than a rape fantasy.
Jul 28, 2017
Anonymous
7/28/17, 10:32 PM
This is insane! It's fantasy! And to say that the stories with exercise are somehow better is ridiculous. Is the story where a man is kidnapped, raped, changed against his will, mentally drained, and race changed also better as long as he doesn't approve of being overweight? Come on, everyone on this sight has a few hang ups or we probably wouldn't be here. But how can you possibly think a fat fetish is somehow worse than kidnapping and rape as long as the guy also exercises???
7/28/17, 9:51 PM
Loved it! I hope he changes more men!
Anonymous
7/28/17, 9:21 PM
more please!!
7/28/17, 8:59 PM
To the above commenter: Try Cris Kane's stories? Plenty of well-written feel good sweetness in many of them.
Anonymous
7/28/17, 8:54 PM
It would only be unfair if neither of them gets Manuel's power Otherwise I like where this is going
Jul 28, 2017
Anonymous
7/28/17, 8:29 PM
Did anyone say anything about the other extreme being a good? No they didn't. But a lot of those stories you're talking about at least have the characters engaging in healthy activities like exercising This story literally has someone hypnotising a sick person into being happy with his unhealthy and obese body
Jul 28, 2017
Peircedskin
7/28/17, 8:25 PM
I enjoyed it. We all have our fetishes and we write for them. I love a fat guy over a muscle guy every time. Bald, hairy, big belly, all turn ons for me. Add some tattoos and piercings and I'll suck you till my jaw cracks. Owning your weight or characteristics not generally accepted by the general gay community is an attractive feature in a man. This story isn't even a horror story like most on here. It is a sweet story about getting a man to accept he's desirable and enjoying his size instead of hiding away and living his life lonely and miserable.
Jul 28, 2017
Anonymous
7/28/17, 8:24 PM
Body Dysmorphic Disorder is something that can and does happen in real life, and yet hyper muscled and unhealthy bodies are written about on here all the time and no one, says beep(because you know they're reasonable and understand its fantasy), wheres the outrage there, if you're really concerned for peoples health? Bodybuilders are often extremely unhealthy, especially during a competition, where they deprive themselves of food and water all in the name of making their bodies 'pop'. Seriously, this is a site for fantasy writing, why get so judgmental and holier than thou just because a particular story tickles a nerve with you.
Jul 28, 2017
Anonymous
7/28/17, 7:14 PM
No one ever said they dont deserve love or whatever...so stop projecting. And the thing about a lot of the erotica on here is that it can't happen in real life Obesity is a medical issues that needs to be dealt with...not encouraged and fetishised.