Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/5/17, 6:09 PM
What part is confusing everyone? There's one part of the story - when Ace and Jack are receiving their treatment -- that is obviously happening at the same time, but for the story, you have to narrate one and then the other. But other than, the story is fine. It's hot. I'm still hard.
tomozco
9/5/17, 5:43 PM
Interesting new installment...always something sexy about corrupting good old uptight cute Mormon boys! I don't mind that there was no feet content in this part, even as a foot lover myself. It's always nice to go into different things once in a while to spice things up! Keep it up! Looking forward to the feet stuff in the next part! ;)
Anonymous
9/5/17, 5:08 PM
You're my favorite author on this site, thank you for this!
Swizzington
9/5/17, 5:00 PM
I enjoyed this story. I do love me some mormons! One thing though. Does anyone in real life actually say stuff like "I'm gonna cum!"? Personally I have never felt the need to announce it out loud. Maybe that's just me :-)
Anonymous
9/5/17, 2:17 PM
Great story!! Loved it!!
Anonymous
9/5/17, 2:11 PM
Jack takes Ace to the dog spa that Mitch referred to Jack, which is operated by Mitch's friends. The friends help Mitch to undo Ace by changing him back to man and turn Jack into the pup. Mitch and Ace are lovers. When Jack changed Ace, Mitch knew he had to save his lover. When he found Jack's mind-altering butt plugs, he decided to save Ace by punishing Jack. WC created the illusion that Ace was a real pup, not a hypno-pup. Jack became a hypno-pup because Mitch wanted to give Ace the ability to impose his justice. Now, is all the confusion gone --- I read the story in three minutes and figured it out. Where was the confusion? Try paying attention to the story.
Anonymous
9/5/17, 12:36 PM
I love it man, thank you!
Anonymous
9/5/17, 11:55 AM
I agree with the comment above me. I can tell it's a good story, but I didn't get what was happening half of the time
M. M.
9/5/17, 11:39 AM
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9/5/17, 11:38 AM
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Anonymous
9/5/17, 10:10 AM
This story confused me.
BarelyBear
9/5/17, 5:11 AM
Interesting adaptation of http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0667901/?ref_=nm_flmg_act_42 Hearts and Minds - Outer LImits.
Anonymous
9/5/17, 4:06 AM
Twists and turns!! Loved it!!
Anonymous
9/5/17, 4:05 AM
Great story!! Loved it!!!
Anonymous
9/5/17, 1:57 AM
What a cool story, I love it! Super hot too
Anonymous
9/5/17, 12:04 AM
Ragnarok he meant double uncle because his real father is his mother's brother. Meaning there is a third sibling. Double uncle as in, from his mother and father's side. He's his uncle from both sides.
marc frank
9/4/17, 11:51 PM
nice beginning......add some illustrations to go with story next time......slave and master..king.
Anonymous
9/4/17, 10:52 PM
I hope Richard has huge feet.
Anonymous
9/4/17, 10:14 PM
One of the best stories I have read in awhile. Your knowledge of history and culture is very refreshing. And the Characters are so well rounded that we grew to love them all. I would second the previous comment and hope you could Bring them ahead in time. Just a thought. Thank you again.
Anonymous
9/4/17, 9:29 PM
great to see you at work again, love the narrative!
Ragnarok
9/4/17, 9:21 PM
So hott. I am very glad to see you continued this great series. However I am a bit confused by the double uncle part. Is he Uncle Bret that means he is also his father, or did his Mom sleep with a second brother of theirs?
Bulk
9/4/17, 8:48 PM
Off to a great start, as usual!
Anonymous
9/4/17, 7:52 PM
Great thank you
Anonymous
9/4/17, 7:48 PM
Love it. Super hot.
Anonymous
9/4/17, 7:44 PM
Love it thx Nicky!
Anonymous
9/4/17, 5:08 PM
Age would be a good heirarchy, or muscle mass.
Anonymous
9/4/17, 2:39 PM
Interesting!!
9/4/17, 1:49 PM
This is fantastic! I love all the world-building you're doing in this story, and the sex scenes are pretty hot too!
9/4/17, 12:45 PM
Interesting premise!
Anonymous
9/4/17, 12:04 PM
would love more I meant to say