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Jan 29, 2018
Martin
1/30/18, 2:11 PM
Brilliantly written! I love your style!
Jan 29, 2018
Anonymous
1/30/18, 1:44 PM
Man, how I wish I had this when I was in High School
Jan 29, 2018
1/30/18, 10:00 AM
More please ....... perfectly written
Jan 29, 2018
Anonymous
1/30/18, 8:43 AM
Excellent
Anonymous
1/30/18, 7:12 AM
Is there a sequel? And I. Liked the "royal cow" idea ;)
Anonymous
1/30/18, 6:54 AM
It can be both.
Anonymous
1/30/18, 5:07 AM
Can hardly wait for part 2 and how his transformation by this barber continues.
1/30/18, 5:00 AM
I will Shadow!
Anonymous
1/30/18, 1:21 AM
Fuck yes, this is what I need. Any time you want to write more, I will be here to read it.
Anonymous
1/30/18, 1:15 AM
I have a overwhelming tit and pec fetish, so this story is unbelievably erotic to me. Mind controls and nipples really do it for me. I definitely hope that it goes on for a while, and there are a number of chapters.
1/29/18, 10:39 PM
@Sillyboys: Ray acting in the shadows sounds super hot and interesting! I'll be here to read the second chapter of your series :)
Anonymous
1/29/18, 9:30 PM
Really need the next chapter...
Sillyboys
1/29/18, 8:08 PM
Thanks for the feedback, everyone! I've been working on another, longer story, and I was getting frustrated both with how slow it was coming (I drastically underestimated how difficult it is to write about a subject you want to masturbate to) and whether or not I'd even have the nerve to post on here -- so I wrote this really quickly as a kind of a "now or never" thing. So that's why it's so short and absent of details, 2 problems I hope to deal with in future stories! I shouldn't have called Ray a supervillain -- I don't read the superhero stories on here, so I didn't think of the kind of implications that would have. So, for now, I'm not planning on doing things with actual superheroes. Though, never say never... In future Cuteification Ray stories, I'm gonna try to not follow the same formula. (i.e. "hey, I'm Ray, you're cute now, now we fuck") Ray likes to stay in the shadows or disguise himself as a trusted friend and watch the changes happen without anyone knowing why... He was just particularly horny today ;p
Anonymous
1/29/18, 7:35 PM
Agreed a bit more of a struggle is needed. I don't so much mind that there is a traditional lack of sex in the story but I think the erotism would come from the struggle/humiliation of being changed against the subjects will. Also yes the more detail the better. Great work though I hope to see more from you!
M
1/29/18, 7:32 PM
Fucking hot story! Keep on posting!
Anonymous
1/29/18, 6:13 PM
I'm really enjoying this series. Keep up the good work :)
Anonymous
1/29/18, 5:40 PM
I liked this. It certainly has potential :)
Anonymous
1/29/18, 5:12 PM
Loved it. More, please.
1/29/18, 3:29 PM
And even more interesting! I love that you started this one with some sex and domination. For those of us into that, you teased at more with Tyrese’s power of persuasion. Even more so with Bazz’s. And there’s some enlarged genitalia as well. On top of all that, the story’s extremely well written and has kept me guessing what’s going on. Nice work! I can’t wait to read more.
1/29/18, 3:09 PM
And the mystery continues :) I’m excited to see where this goes.
1/29/18, 2:58 PM
Wow. Great start. Definitely has my interest.
Anonymous
1/29/18, 2:21 PM
I love the concept and the first chapter. Also agree with the comments here—more detailed changes would be hotter. Especially if the subject strains a bit more to figure out what’s happening to them. I’d love to see a tough alpha bodybuilder (like Julian Smith) get exposed to this ray. A stern, hyper masculine type getting cute would be fun to think about.
1/29/18, 1:41 PM
Great idea for a transformation series! I like all the options and potential on that gun. I wish the info from the introduction had been introduced in a less explicit way, though (who's Ray, what's that gun, ...). Readers can learn about those details as the story unfolds. But this is just my opinion. The story works very well the way it is :)
Anonymous
1/29/18, 11:36 AM
Only quibble is that Niamh is a girls name
Anonymous
1/29/18, 11:33 AM
I would love to see what Lucas looks like now
Anonymous
1/29/18, 5:43 AM
hmmm i like it and want more
Anonymous
1/29/18, 4:46 AM
Can't wait for more tf of men
mgreene70@yahoo.com
1/29/18, 4:33 AM
Yes because the events described occur on the same day from the viewpoint of 4 different characters: Tyrese, Sven, Miles and Bazz.
Anonymous
1/29/18, 4:07 AM
Great!! Hope we’ll see more lesser known protagonists are absorbed!!
Cskowronski@roadrunner.com
1/29/18, 1:48 AM
More more more!!!