Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/15/18, 5:03 PM
For some reason i kinda hope Alex will turn into a verry cruel men that even diamond will be impressed by I dont know why
2/15/18, 2:55 PM
Absman420 here! Yes, a motor home — an RV. They cross the country solving crimes and getting into erotic situations! Call Netflix — that’s a series!
2/15/18, 2:49 PM
Wow. That was a hot alternate ending. Mean, very mean, but hot. This one didnt seem nearly as straight forward as the first version. Which leaves me a little torn as to which I like better. I love a happy ending, but also love a hot ending. Awesome work, M!
Anonymous
2/15/18, 8:10 AM
The ending I really wanted! Thanks so much. Would love to see more of this.
Big Mike
2/15/18, 7:15 AM
"finally I figured a car"... not a car, a motorhome! I figure some kind of innocuous appearing vehicle like a Winnebago that in fact contains the most nocuous formula. The Trojan horse o' lust. Ah well, it's your story and thanks again for sharing. If it never goes farther, no worries.
Anonymous
2/15/18, 6:18 AM
Did not like this ending. I get sick and tried of evil winning. Prefer the first ending.
Anonymous
2/15/18, 3:04 AM
Loved this story!! Hot! And LF is right. "Josh" is way too cute.
Anonymous
2/15/18, 3:03 AM
So fucking hot!!!!
Anonymous
2/15/18, 2:51 AM
Interesting!!
Anonymous
2/15/18, 2:50 AM
Excellent!!
LongtimeFan
2/15/18, 1:47 AM
Incredible story! Love the gradual reveal and sexy hypnosis. And I have to say...I think “Josh” is the most attractive man you’ve ever linked in these stories. That shot of him blank-eyed, hand on his pecs...hoo boy.
2/14/18, 10:24 PM
Wow. You're so right. When I wrote this chapter, I was also entertaining the idea of writing a literary masterpiece called 'Gay Mind Control Saves America!' Maybe that seeped in here. Shit. If I had intended to have a political allusion, there definitely would have been a character named Kellyanne Kookaburra. And she would hoot menacingly (and also annoyingly and full of self-importance) before anything scary happened to the heroes.
Anonymous
2/14/18, 9:03 PM
I can tell you have a taste for clean-shaven, naturally hairless twinks, and I approve. If you can include more detail in your future stories about how your boys look and feel as they shave and become more hairless, (including smoother and smoother faces) that would be awesome :)
LongTime Fan
2/14/18, 6:08 PM
Another fantastic story! While it’s incredibly hot watching the mental transformation and total surrender of personality, it’s also thought-provoking. What would it be like if society really WAS like this? Of course the alarm bells go off—“can’t be happy without sadness,” “not really free,” etc.—But if people are so deeply entranced that they can’t even PICTURE freedom, aren’t they, in some way, “truly” happy? You get the blood flowing in both directions, Hypnothrill, and that’s why you’re the best! :D
Anonymous
2/14/18, 5:49 PM
I would love to see this continue. So glad that Ed is still Z32.
Anonymous
2/14/18, 4:16 PM
Particularly would love to see a dark interaction between Axel, Tyrese and Lagos now that he's won
Anonymous
2/14/18, 4:14 PM
Please do! Would love to see more of Tyrese, Lagos and his loyal bitches
ExhibSlut
2/14/18, 2:50 PM
Unexpected but satisfying. Yes, more please! Still some unanswered questions: what was Shanghai doing in America? Does the hierarchy of musk override relationships or does it coexist with it? Did the new society evolve differently in different regions? For example, what is the new society like in Japan, where everybody is Asian but society was already pretty hierarchical? And, of course, what is the origin of the virus?
mgreene70@yahoo.com
2/14/18, 1:43 PM
If any of you would like a continuation of this dark scenario, please let me know...
Anonymous
2/14/18, 1:25 PM
The world would be so much better like this
Anonymous
2/14/18, 1:04 PM
Loved it!
Anonymous
2/14/18, 12:14 PM
Great story dude! Thanks alot for sharing!
Anonymous
2/14/18, 12:10 PM
This really is the gift that keeps on giving thank you so much for adding this
2/14/18, 11:51 AM
Absman420 here — thanks Big Mike for the comments and thoughts. I wish I could say I’m back and it were totally true! I’m trying hard to create time for creative writing in my schedule. It doesn’t amount to much, but I’m in there! I agree that there would have to be a “cooling off” period for Mick — he can’t be at full throttle for the entire series, although my his calm periods would be equal to any normal man’s horniest moments. Now you see why I enjoy plotting a story arc almost more than writing it! The possibilities!!!!! Incidentally, in my mind’s eye, I initially saw them flying to LA, then I figured the train would be smarter, but that’s a LONG journey from NYC to LA. Finally, I figured car — but they’d need someone else to drive. Haha. Maybe Uber???? Let’s call it what it is: the morality of transforming someone — even the slightest bit — is staggering, god-like in its arrogance. That’s one reason I enjoy playing with it in this context — we all fall prey to our sexual weaknesses....
MalSkin
2/14/18, 6:39 AM
I loved this series sad to see it end. I for one really liked how Ed was transformed into Unit Z32 would have liked to see a description of Bazz when he saw his lover devoid of emotion
Big Mike
2/14/18, 5:37 AM
Hey Absman420! So happy to see you back at it, been a long time. I love your stories because 1. they get me off and 2. they make me think about morality, right and wrong, and shit. You are zen master. Anyway, this story got me dreaming of a million ways that Mick and Tito go cross country, perhaps on a train. Yes, Mick's libido would have to come down a notch or three to even travel, but hey, it's an evolving story. Maybe if Mick cums 5x day he can be controlled, so Tito has his work cut out for him, I can picture Tito bravely failing all across the country, with various amusing and hair-raising consequences. It's a rare story teller who can inspire that kind of instant internal world-building in others. Thank you for writing.
Anonymous
2/14/18, 4:30 AM
This is a great start. Maybe they change a little differently each time Maybe a humanoid form with their heads and cocks swapping places or some other various perversions during each transformation
Anonymous
2/14/18, 4:28 AM
Love this slow transformation stories!! Hot!!
Andrew
2/14/18, 4:16 AM
nice work from you, love it.
Anonymous
2/14/18, 1:39 AM
Great story - not the ending I was hoping for (must have darker fantasies) but all good! Sorry to see it go.