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9/15/23, 6:28 AM
Hope there won't be too long a wait for the next part. The suspense is killing me!
9/15/23, 3:59 AM
Fuck perfect chapter man! This was everything I wanted and more!! I vote 2 and 3!!
9/15/23, 3:38 AM
Thanks! And yes, my writing does deserve more praise, he he. Thanks for telling everyone! Two more chapters I think
9/15/23, 3:36 AM
Cada vez mas atrevido el chico... aunq la vdd me quede con ganas de saber mas en forma que le paso al papá :P aunque parece que habra mas al respecto en el proximo cap :3
9/15/23, 3:32 AM
A hot, hot story.
Chasm
9/15/23, 3:24 AM
Absolutely love your writing. You manage to make Travis’s transformation sound so appealing as he submits to black cock. This chapter was even better than the last. I don’t know how many more chapters you plan to write but I know however Travis ends up, I’ll enjoy it. Thank you for an incredibly hot story, this series and your writing deserves far more praise.
9/15/23, 3:20 AM
Wow, that's a lot of interest in the story, thanks everyone! I think I was unclear. GSS has a nifty "Choose-your-own-adventure" type branching-paths option to use for stories such as this. I have already written all 3 of the outcomes. I will post all 3 of them together after I finish editing, and you will get to chose which of the 3 to read. (Or you can read all 3 ;) )
9/14/23, 2:18 PM
Absolutely option #1. If there's a second choice, option #3 as well!

9/15/23, 2:57 AM
I agree with @[Terinas Tiger](/user/show/77652): option #1. If there’s a second choice, option #3
9/15/23, 2:44 AM
I've read both chapters of this so many times this week waiting eagerly for chapter 3!
9/15/23, 1:50 AM
Faggification of jocks is more interesting than further jockification of dudes who are already jocks, so, 1. If the other two were nerdy twinks first who got jockified, though, then that'd be better.
Sep 14, 2023
9/14/23, 11:24 PM
This was a lot of fun to read, especially the line "as if in an example of bad comic book writing." Thanks for sharing it.

Throne
9/15/23, 1:33 AM
@[Wrestlr](/user/show/1233047) And thank YOU for spotting and commenting on that. I couldn't resist including it and some other bad jokes.
Anonymous
9/15/23, 1:33 AM
i'm so mad i have to choose, they all sound great! but if i must, 1 is for sure my favorite and 3 is a close second. awesome so far, keep up the great work!
Sep 14, 2023
9/14/23, 11:29 AM
I cant find your deviantart profile anymore

Throne
9/14/23, 2:57 PM
@[zekekb11](/user/show/10004339) I was recently kicked off Deviant Art for posting extreme fetish material. The details are in my profile, here on GSS. It was quite a shock when it happened.

9/15/23, 1:29 AM
@Throne Oh gosh I'm sorry to hear you lost all that material! I made a point of dumping text copies into an archive I could get to after losing some of my early writing that was basically fanfiction for quite a while until I found it in the way back machine.

Throne
9/15/23, 1:32 AM
@[Nocturne13](/user/show/263497) I do have copies of my Fiction Mania stories, because I sent them as emails and then moved the originals to a file I created. Sadly, with Deviant Art, because I created everything right on their site, I have nothing.
Sep 14, 2023
9/15/23, 1:30 AM
I was very amused by this story. I could only think of it as someone deconstructing the utterly serious superheroes like The Boys and turning it into gay porn.
9/15/23, 1:03 AM
Fckk i want more!!
9/14/23, 9:53 PM
This is excellent!!! I hope there’s more to come!!
9/14/23, 9:21 PM
What a great story. I vote 2 and 3.
9/14/23, 8:26 PM
Maybe B with some A (Bodyguards in dress uniforms with tall black boots)
9/14/23, 6:44 PM
All are good, but 1 especially!
EJG
9/14/23, 4:25 PM
I'd want all three as No.2,...or if not 2 and 3 to be fair
9/14/23, 4:08 PM
I followed it fine. He left the flower in the kid's car as he drove off. Then the camera pans back to Ken for his get away. @Rubbersome please continue this story. I'm rereading it now and it has the same effect. Focus on those that are greatful for the orgasms you can bring from your words.
9/14/23, 3:25 PM
2, and maybe 3. Interesting set up.
9/14/23, 12:44 PM
would love to see all but 2&3 sound the most fun