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Corinthian
6/11/18, 8:53 PM
Great story - many thanks!
Anonymous
6/11/18, 8:48 PM
Very hot. Looking forward to more installments
Kane
6/11/18, 8:43 PM
Awesome story!
Anonymous
6/11/18, 6:39 PM
if this becames a series, bake une of the next players a cowboy (just a sugestion)
tony
6/11/18, 5:31 PM
what a bloody hot story tenting in my pants here wow keep it up
bleuboy
6/11/18, 4:35 PM
This hit all of my buttons!! Just clean up the spacing and what TickledPink suggested and this story would be amazing! I love stories where motives are sinister or things are done just because!
Fagboi
6/11/18, 4:11 PM
Really love the wrestling angle. Would love for you to keep this series going. Perhaps a match between a gay challenger and a Hetero champion. Each pin for the challenger making the champion gayer. Until the match ends with the challenger victorious and taking his prize the belt and his opponents virginity.
Anonymous
6/11/18, 3:54 PM
I would love to see a sequel. There’s an awful lot of potential here. So many avenues and aspects that you weren’t able to fit into this. I’d particularky like to see one of your trademark 3rd person transformations. Perhaps someone gets infected with too few of the microbes for a speedy corruption so they fall in slow motion as others are liquified around them? Either way, another wanking good contribution from a true master.
Anonymous
6/11/18, 3:43 PM
Happy endings are always pleasurable!!!
CigarDADDY
6/11/18, 3:35 PM
Gotta do a sequel. We need to see the captain introducing his sons to his cocksnot and assgoo. Great story once again!!
nyjogger4e@aol.com
6/11/18, 3:29 PM
Loved the gradual transition for straight to cock slut! Thanks!
Anonymous
6/11/18, 3:26 PM
This was intriguing!!!
Anonymous
6/11/18, 3:25 PM
Great story!! Loved it!!!
CigarDADDY
6/11/18, 3:23 PM
What? No victory cigar for the winner?
TheGerman
6/11/18, 2:51 PM
I planned to write one or two more parts. But because of the poorly resonance it stays with this one. Should anyone still want to know how Doctor Tom looks like: https://docsnmore.tumblr.com/image/174399060171 Because of this second experience, I come to the conclusion that topics that I like are not in demand here. That's why I don't publish anything on gayspiralstories anymore. It’s ok, there are enough authors here.
Anonymous
6/11/18, 2:45 PM
great story - without condoms next time?
6/11/18, 2:27 PM
What a fun game and interesting conclusion. Live the rimming though I wish it was from the tops point of view. But yeah great story!
6/11/18, 2:16 PM
Oh wow nifty. Nice ending. Nice story. Sweet and adorable and oh so enjoyable.
6/11/18, 2:04 PM
I really liked the concept you've set out here, and there's some great visuals. I do love a man in a mockery of a uniform. A couple of parts you've got different characters speaking in the same paragraph, which makes it a little confusing to follow, I think putting them on new lines would really help out with that. Very fun, thanks for sharing!
Anonymous
6/11/18, 1:50 PM
This is such a good story! Many thanks :)
Anonymous
6/11/18, 1:32 PM
Beautiful ending
Anonymous
6/11/18, 11:37 AM
Let's see what Brad will do in front of his master. Maybe Daniel or some others will be there,too
Anonymous
6/11/18, 11:26 AM
please continue the chapter
Jun 10, 2018
Anonymous
6/11/18, 9:26 AM
I really liked the first half or so but I felt the transition from caustic nerds to himbos was a little too swift. A lot of the description of the dumbing down I liked... I'd enjoy reading more extended material about that in another future story if you're so inclined.
6/11/18, 9:15 AM
I loved the ending!
6/11/18, 8:54 AM
Awesome story!
6/11/18, 8:54 AM
Cheers, the story was initially going to be a one-parter, but I had a few more ideas that amused me too much to leave. There'll be one more shortly.
Anonymous
6/11/18, 6:25 AM
Welcome back! You've had some of the best material on here and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. You've been missed!
Anonymous
6/11/18, 5:27 AM
Fantastic story
Anonymous
6/11/18, 5:26 AM
I like this concept! The best part is thinking about all the other fun childhood games that can be in store for them next!