Recent Comments

BoydWunder
5/27/18, 5:57 PM
Interesting premise. Looking forward to chapter two.
Harold
5/27/18, 5:48 PM
Good start. Keep going.
Anonymous
5/27/18, 5:15 PM
The Stepford Wives, but The Stepford Pigs. Four couples move to a new job/ living estate. Their partners work but are subtly changed to want their partners to become sex pigs - urinal/ rubber pigs/ Muscle thong pig etc and each partner disappears and comes back different, to the horror/ worry of remaining friends.
Harold
5/27/18, 3:11 PM
You should do at least another chapter that fleshes out Superman's assimilation with a little more detail.
Jimmy
5/27/18, 10:49 AM
I think you ought to do a continuation to this story!
5/27/18, 9:01 AM
I'm not sure how you took that message from this story, Miles. Maybe you need to work on your close reading skills. And your punctuation.
Anonymous
5/27/18, 6:59 AM
I dont know how to get into the forum here. tell me what direction you guys want to go and I'll write spin offs.
Anonymous
5/27/18, 5:58 AM
YAAAAAS amazing!
RiderVitalli
5/27/18, 4:10 AM
I'd pay to commission a fleshed out, detailed story based on that hanky code idea!! =O
Anonymous
5/27/18, 2:07 AM
Thanks for the warning Tkhon, but I think the length is perfect ! A thorough telling of the story of how a COWBOY is made and be able to see his progression through the training videos. To complete the farm, farmhands are needed and we see how they are groomed as well. As the comment above more detail on the clothing would be nice and maybe work in some of the hanky code ( ? lol ) also doen't every farm have a 'watering hole' where cowboys and cowhands go to skinny dip ?. I also think real cowboys now how to use a rope too ( wink ) and they wrangle their cowhands so a little BDSM could be added in I think. It is a VERY erotic story, thank you !