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10/17/18, 5:17 AM
My favorite for this author and one of my go to's
Anonymous
10/16/18, 10:02 PM
father is
Betasskin
10/16/18, 9:39 PM
Truly awesome, concise, yet touching on some very poignant and serious human experiences. Full of compassion really. And hot. Next, will the Entity absorb the full gamut of Gay Sex? Ahem. :P
screamingmoist
10/16/18, 8:56 PM
I thought about going more extreme with the ending, but decided to dial it back a bit. I have some more in the works that should be a bit more severe for those that are interested. Thanks for reading everyone!
Anonymous
10/16/18, 8:48 PM
love it... more please !!!!!
Kyle
10/16/18, 7:26 PM
Fantastic as always. so well-written and excellent transformations. The end twist of using Luke as an orgy maker is great! Thanks for a great Halloween tale.
Rodready
10/16/18, 7:14 PM
Always a total pleasure to find a new one by you. Respect, bro.
Anonymous
10/16/18, 6:52 PM
Please continue. My only complaint is how long I had to wait for part 2!
10/16/18, 6:11 PM
WóÓÔÒòF!!! 🐻 Really love this story.  Hope Matt grows a beard. 😉
Anonymous
10/16/18, 3:26 PM
Loved the 2nd part!
Mutabear
10/16/18, 2:21 PM
Hell yes.  More hairy jock boys!!!
Aug 3, 2018
Anonymous
10/16/18, 2:20 PM
Wonderful story! I would love to see more, maybe with someone who's more resistant to what the toys or suggestions do? That could be interesting!
10/16/18, 2:15 PM
Very hot! I really like how the pace of the changes accelerates, Trev getting practically transformed in an instant.
Anonymous
10/16/18, 1:57 PM
Fun Story!!!!
Anonymous
10/16/18, 12:10 PM
Great! We need the father, cops, soldiers, gangs, and more construction workers!
Anonymous
10/16/18, 11:51 AM
thank you man, I love it! more please
Mikelg
10/16/18, 10:37 AM
it's a lovely story, thanks :)
AeonFlux
10/16/18, 9:22 AM
More
10/16/18, 5:11 AM
I bloody loved it.!
Anonymous
10/16/18, 3:00 AM
Sure would love an entire chapter just on Wyatt's self-debasement stories ;) Otherwise, great story with great ending
bikerbro
10/16/18, 2:53 AM
A great concept, and an appropriately spoopy aesthetic! I just wish the end result was more extreme, and they weren't as accepting - it never sits right with me to establish a revenge plot, especially with themes/extremes like this, then have the host accept them into their everyday lives with minimal consequence. The TFs themselves were hot, and loved the concept of the antagonist toying with them from afar, but the ending fell flat for me. Would love to see more of this nature, though.
Anonymous
10/15/18, 11:26 PM
Spectacular
Anonymous
10/15/18, 6:53 PM
Delicious, humiliating, and perfectly spooky.
10/15/18, 6:42 PM
By the middle, I found this very scary. You really created a sinister and horrifying mood! I thought the four would get a heavier dose of revenge, but it was an alright ending.
10/15/18, 5:33 PM
Please continue!
10/15/18, 5:26 PM
So many devious plans and transformations! Super!
Oct 13, 2018
Lycanthro
10/15/18, 3:44 PM
I loved this. Burly men are are my favorite the hairier the better. And when they bottom it's the best. Good job on this the build up was good how his relationship gradually changed from wife to friend to acquaintance. Loved
ForgottenCradle
10/15/18, 2:57 PM
I always find the small top/big sub stories very intriguing,but the powerbottom calling the shots on his top slave is rare in stories. That's why I enjoyed this immensely. Great work,hope to see it continue and Todd enslave lots of muscular studs
degoetz@yahoo.com
10/15/18, 2:52 PM
This was super hot and went in a more interesting direction than I expected. Excellent story!
10/15/18, 1:50 PM
I'm so into this story a tear actually welled up in my eye when I read the portion where Charlie asks Todd the probing question. Maybe Charles can give Todd (I liked the name Iowa more :) ) a half-bottle of the Mariposa? :)