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LongtimeFan
3/31/19, 8:11 AM
I love this series!...but I have to agree with Hypnothrill on this one. It's explicitly stated that Jim's dad has NOT been to the diner, so all of his actions were of his own free will. Take away the hypnosis/mind control, and you're left with something that feels emotionally and mentally abusive (especially because you do an awesome job at writing Jim as a lost, frightened kid). As Hypnodominion said, it might be a set-up, but in general, seeing Jim forced into his transformation by someone who WASN'T magically/hypnotically influenced feels cruel. I'll keep reading, though--love seeing what comes next!
Anonymous
3/31/19, 6:22 AM
awesome as always! pleas write more
Onodera
3/31/19, 5:56 AM
Really hot the story! I loved all the story so far of Lt. Mustang had so far! He is the perfect alpha soldier! Made completely for combat and cum! Man, the idea is very hot!! I wonder what will happen to him from now on! Please, continue this series!
nerdysuitedbaby
3/31/19, 5:41 AM
Loved this chapter kind of cute and sweet to see him so vulnerable. Poor kid! I hope Jim isn't completely gone I mean he's preppy without the complete mood control so love to see how this goes. Maybe he'll run into his friends and try to reconnect. Will he be happy to be reunited or will this drive him to fight? Interesting take. Also curious about the first time they had to transform someone so fast. As Grizz was the second could be a chapter or a spin off story. Also love to see you write other prep stories on top of this series. If you'd like to exchange ideas or chat feel free to email me at suited.baby.venom@gmail.com
Onodera
3/31/19, 5:35 AM
Very hot and AMAZING story, man! I loved how you wrote about capturing big alpha male soldier to be bound and milked endless! This is very hot!! I going definitely read the other ones!!
Anonymous
3/31/19, 3:54 AM
like cycle+clone!! we'll see the fate of these awesome characters very soon. amazing as always!!
Anonymous
3/31/19, 2:23 AM
I love this! Please make more
Anonymous
3/31/19, 1:15 AM
there's gotta be more of this kind of non-surgical ball-removal. i don't know why it's so hot to me to have them just sort of transform away in some form or another (but surgical removal is a complete turn-off)
Jul 15, 2018
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3/30/19, 11:33 PM
Interesting start, but no follow up.
Anonymous
3/30/19, 10:16 PM
I was really hoping Jim would willingly become James, but this was good. I hope there will be a group reunion, or maybe James will find a way to properly thank his dad.
3/30/19, 10:04 PM
I agree....perhaps Ben's story using a different form of narrative... This is some, as Max might say...hot ass shit!!
3/30/19, 9:47 PM
To address Hypnothrill's comments (BTW, Hypnothrill,I'm a huge fan of your work)....I have thefeelingthat this chapter is a true set-up, with the payoff being that Dad was actually in on it, a la the husbands in Siepford Wives .... well played, sir!
trytoknowyou@gmail.com
3/30/19, 9:16 PM
I loved this! Not every chapter need some kind of sex. And I loved the new transformation.
MakeMeAPigToo
3/30/19, 8:51 PM
Loved this!!!
Ben Conners
3/30/19, 7:31 PM
I love it. The clone aspect is very interesting and I hope we get to see some of Ben's birthday.
LongtimeFan
3/30/19, 7:23 PM
I don't know how you do it, Hypnothrill--every chapter is somehow hotter than the last! The muscle descriptions, the pictures you paint of a gym packed with mindless studs in jockstraps, the shifting dialogue...all brilliant. And silly me--I never realized the "clone" double entendre until you pointed it out! (I saw it as "Cycle," as in steroids). I DO, however, love the use of Eminem's "Lose Yourself"--very clever. Cheers!
Anonymous
3/30/19, 7:12 PM
I like reading about stats (weight, cock lenght). That turns me on (or helps me in imagining them huge)
Anonymous
3/30/19, 7:03 PM
looking forward to the next part!
3/30/19, 6:31 PM
I really liked the previous chapters, but I'm not quite feeling this one (despite enjoying some details like the oatmeal eating). For me, the story would work so much better if we found out that Jim's dad went to the diner the day before and came out with a sudden desire to preppify his son. Right now, his actions seem completely unmotivated, and most of the story just reads like a depressingly realistic tale of a conservative father bullying his teenage son.
Anonymous
3/30/19, 5:18 PM
I did just want to say that being 6'4" is not an advantage in wrestling. It raises your center of gravity, making you easier to bring down. Most wrestlers have the short and stocky body type for a reason.
gocarty
3/30/19, 5:04 PM
Really enjoying this story. In this chapter, I love the moment when Dr. Blake says, "Why don't you take him up the rear?" Totally sexualizes the moment and adds several levels of eroticism to the situation.
Mar 29, 2019
Anonymous
3/30/19, 4:27 PM
I already cum the for the first group, too long. Gonna continue the next time im horny. Tomorrow night.
Anonymous
3/30/19, 3:50 PM
Great story!! Loved it!!!
Anonymous
3/30/19, 3:48 PM
Great story, as usual!!!
Barny
3/30/19, 3:06 PM
HORNY is too soft a word. Thanks I enjoyed it enormously.
Anonymous
3/30/19, 12:41 PM
I agree I want to see a part two where Greg becomes a bottom but knows he's straight but can't help having sex and is completly submissive around any older man.
Anonymous
3/30/19, 12:24 PM
I love the use of Spanish and how the boys turned into drones who desire being fucked.
Anonymous
3/30/19, 12:08 PM
awesome, cant wait for the next part
3/30/19, 11:53 AM
Thank you! Considering no real fucking has happened yet, it does read hot. Sometimes -- as you well know -- the tease of sex is almost as good as the sex itself, sometimes better. Personally, I think the last two chapters of this story are worth the rest of it. Like you -- rereading it after all these years -- I think it has a surprisingly strong opening, but if I were to edit it down, there are chunks of it in the middle chapters that could go -- they're fun, but not necessary to the advancement of the plot. I was enjoying the characters when I was writing it, the feedback was inspiring and so, I extended the plot (it's like a Netflix show that gets a second season so has to stretch the material -- fortunately, in my case, "stretching the material" was part of the fetish) But chapters 11 & 12, when they Budd Brothers finally get back home Kansas? Woof. The payoff is definitely worth it...
Mar 29, 2019
Anonymous
3/30/19, 11:51 AM
Love this.