Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/26/19, 11:34 AM
I wish there were more chapters, this series is hot.
Caboose
5/26/19, 8:50 AM
Hot damn does this have some great imagery. i love a good rimming scene and this delivers!
Tass
5/26/19, 8:05 AM
nice plot. Like your transfromation stories since the first one Dominos
Apr 25, 2018
Anonymous
5/26/19, 6:26 AM
awesome, cant wait reading next
ShitPig
5/26/19, 3:51 AM
Fuck, this series was hot!
5/26/19, 3:22 AM
Great story. Intriguing to wonder if Samuels is the only fuckslave for the unit or if they have all been programmed as fuckslaves and the Sergeant decides who he wants at any given time. And I love how even the Sergeant's cum dominates all the others and Samuels can feel and taste the dominance. Great idea!
Anonymous
5/25/19, 10:42 PM
Very hot, is there going to be any more parts?
Anonymous
5/25/19, 9:04 PM
Soooo hot story, I love when a dad is a forced faggot slave, if only the son were the master.
May 24, 2019
5/25/19, 6:54 PM
I focused more on the transformation rather than their past history. I could have built up the relationship longer to end in a denouement but i like faster paced stories. I don't like doing scenes with harassment of gay or bi men.
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
5/25/19, 6:16 PM
Always love being the slut for many men at one time. Not possible in a mall as in the story, of course, but there are places my true self can come out.
May 24, 2019
Anonymous
5/25/19, 5:37 PM
my critique is a positive one. The premise is good as is the process but it's too short and almost rushed. A longer history of antagonism by James and a former submission by Karl would lead to a more satisfying reversal of roles. And I'd have like to have seen James realise how bad he was and how much he enjoys the thought of being with Karl. And maybe a bit of animalistic need to go with the changes.
5/25/19, 5:20 PM
Wow, being a theatre major really has changed since I graduated.
5/25/19, 4:31 PM
I'm planning on continuing this. In fact I'm working on Chapter 3 right now. This was more inspired by the Demonic Sex gay comic. I was kinda planning on doing a gay version of the black Pharoh comic but with the wider DC Comics (this I'm planning on keeping it in the Arrowverse and crossing over with Supernatural and maybe Teen Wolf). For some variations on demon forms I'm going to use demonic furry forms (such as pigs/boars) and other ideas...If you guys have any ideas let me know of different demon forms or plot, comment here or message me on my twitter @tyl7897 Also to add some more variation, I'm thinking on changing Oliver's demonic form into something else. I have some ideas such as a demonic furry-based but wanted to see if you guys have any ideas that I haven't think of (either furry or other) :)
Anonymous
5/25/19, 3:35 PM
Man, that was interesting. This has a lot of potential too. it would be like the gay vers of Black Pharaoh's comic. please continue this...
Steve
5/25/19, 3:21 PM
So hot and so well written...I would like to sign up for the next seminar, please....
Dec 15, 2013
nyjogger4e@aol.com
5/25/19, 12:56 PM
A great seduction followed by amazingly hot sex. Wish there was a second chapter, but you write so many diverse stories that I guess you don't have the time. My sincere compliments on another brilliant effort.
5/25/19, 9:52 AM
>"Well, dog my shit, look at us!" > LOL -- I had a good friend, a bodybuilder who worked construction -- in a CAT diesel hat no less -- who said that all the time. I thought it was funny. I wonder whatever happened to him? Hopefully transformed like the Budd Bros...
sniffer
5/25/19, 9:42 AM
still one of my favorites ruff
Anonymous
5/25/19, 7:45 AM
hot
Derek Williams
5/25/19, 5:41 AM
Really well done dude. Especially loved the mental transform.
5/25/19, 4:32 AM
Great story. So hot. Two brothers, a football coach and an oil rigger growing in hyper masculinity and loving it, needing it. Great combination of masculine guys. And another great line, comedic this time: "โ€œWell, dog my shit, look at us!โ€
Anonymous
5/25/19, 2:58 AM
๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ Oml the ending
Anonymous
5/25/19, 12:13 AM
A phenomenal
Anonymous
5/25/19, 12:10 AM
love the idea of two slobs being dominant over sub muscle men
firesix
5/25/19, 12:08 AM
Wow! I'm like the guy above, I adore switcheroo stories. I may write another piece for this story pretty soon.
Anonymous
5/24/19, 10:30 PM
So hot ! I love it when dads get controlled. Also I like how Ryan enjoys every bit of the raunchyness. thank you for your writing :)
May 22, 2019
Vicbiguy
5/24/19, 8:56 PM
Personally I HATE feminization, prefer dumb muscular guys! Would love to see more chapters, plus I love your images!
Anonymous
5/24/19, 8:16 PM
the names of the two characters are sometimes switched around, e.g. when kissing for the first
5/24/19, 7:11 PM
Thanks all for the kind words :)
LongtimeFan
5/24/19, 7:07 PM
PHENOMENAL! I can't believe this is only your first story. The transformations are top-notch--like an above commenter said, muscle growth and dumbing down are my biggest kinks, so kudos. You also do a phenomenal job of capturing a theatre student's life, and the characterization is spot-on without being over the top. And I love the twist of the seemingly kind professor being a manipulative reality warper...hot stuff. You have a lot of talent! :)