Recent Comments

6/13/19, 7:04 PM
This is really good, I really enjoyed it. Especially the dumbing down and becoming more animal like.
Anonymous
6/13/19, 6:30 PM
This is so fucking hot, I love it so much, please don't stop
Angell Kitty
6/13/19, 6:11 PM
I'm sorry, I'll try to be more careful.
Anonymous
6/13/19, 1:37 PM
I wish he could have survived. Maybe transforming inside the suit to not need to breathe or eat. Like a boot drone or something. But, other than the death at the end, it was pretty hot.
Anonymous
6/13/19, 1:12 PM
please make a part 4 i need to watch the news
Kevin
6/13/19, 11:28 AM
great story
6/13/19, 10:32 AM
Try better next time.
Ade
6/13/19, 10:28 AM
The story is quite nice and most errors in your english dont feel intrusive. However you referred to the rival president as her, which was intrusive. 7/10
Perfect
6/13/19, 8:22 AM
i cannot wait to see the army and how the seed is spread. very good
drgnawbones@gmail.com
6/13/19, 7:46 AM
I really like these stories. The characters are fun, I like the band's different themes and colors. I keep picturing Sailor Moon style transformations and costumes for them. Thanks for writing this! By the way my favorite is Drew.
ForgottenCradle
6/13/19, 7:38 AM
oh,this story is beautiful and hot at the same time
Beardfull
6/13/19, 7:33 AM
You sir, together with Mcbaer are my favorite writers. I also check this site constantly to see if you have any new posts. You are a great storyteller and writer and you push all my sexual fetishes buttons. Only one request... more detail and attention to big bushy facial hair would be greatly appreciated. Also please continue your other series!!!! Im a grateful big fan of yours!
Anonymous
6/13/19, 7:15 AM
> Cutlerfan 6/11/19 8:51 PM If the sons are now both gay I don’t see how the farm will be passed down to ‘future generations’. There won’t be any. Not true, with the fact that he milks them regularly, he could easily get a surrogate with semen by collecting them
Anonymous
6/13/19, 5:03 AM
WOW. AMAZING WORK
LongtimeFan
6/13/19, 4:53 AM
HOT STUFF! As others have said, you do a fantastic job juggling different poetry styles in a sexy way. Write what YOU want to write! :D As for favorites, it's a tossup between the twink characters and the musclehead, although the workout songs are definitely my favorite--guys dumbing down and pumping up was the kink that brought me to this site in the first place. ;D
6/13/19, 4:21 AM
As always, a really hot sexy story. I love your work and check this site to see if you've posted something each day. Well done once again!
Anonymous
6/13/19, 4:07 AM
If you are still writing this story, I think it reads okay, but Alex is one MOFO who does need to learn a lesson in submission. Rob from your other story "I love him but..." was a better lead character, who while perverse and evil, he was clearly "good" in that he only sought what made him happiest, like Ryan or teaching homophobe Paul a lesson. Alex started this story as a narcissist, he loves himself far too much to love anyone else. That is the weakness in the Re-Educator versus the Megawave as a mind control device, the Re-educator can reshape perceptions and "control conscious mind, the "Megawave" can rewrite the emotions and attitudes along with controlling actions. I'd love to see Alex fail against Rob, who in turn changes Alex to something...far more inverted, perhaps a Beta bitch boi or have Jake become his gay nerd bully, who have learned a few irreversible "lessons" from this experience along with his family. If you want assistance with a conclusion, I'd love to give your story a proper end, where everyone has a "satisfying sexy" conclusion.
Anonymous
6/13/19, 4:02 AM
i don't find the formula repetitive at all. you must have put a lot of effort into making the lyrics rhyme. Very hot and
6/13/19, 3:53 AM
How does one peruse the stories posted and not click on "Enchanted Ass Forest"? Great title. It wasn't what I expected. But I loved it. Great creative idea and very hot to read.
Anonymous
6/13/19, 3:24 AM
Concept is original. I loved it!!!
Anonymous
6/13/19, 2:18 AM
I loved it
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
6/13/19, 1:04 AM
You still on telegram?
6/12/19, 11:58 PM
Oh, and by the way...my favorite song is Terms of Service
6/12/19, 11:52 PM
This was soooo well-constructed and...frankly...hotter than Hell! I found myself utterly swept away by the narrative. If you have any more in you at all,I'll, as the Mindvoiderz sing. be back!!!
Slave Abdamelek
6/12/19, 8:10 PM
Thank you very much! Feedback is much appreciated. I am working on it.
Anonymous
6/12/19, 7:37 PM
That was interesting and sweet. I love it. Also to the anon before me, no way is Master gonna sell Gruff, he's too possessive of his former bully. But yeah as much as it saddens me I can see Master selling Sam away
Anonymous
6/12/19, 6:50 PM
Would be nice to have more description on the characters. I can't tell what the three assistant coaches look like.
Anonymous
6/12/19, 6:28 PM
I would like to volunteer to be a test subject in these kind of sexual health studies. Drug me, rape me, force me to suck cock and swallow hot loads of cum! I'll gladly sign up tomorrow! 😍😍😍😍
Mutabear
6/12/19, 6:25 PM
Amazing hairy story as always! I can't wait to see what other men he changes. I would also love to see the rest of the team's reaction to their gorilla of a coach the next day!
Anonymous
6/12/19, 5:09 PM
I really need a talented, skilled Doctor 😷 like that to personally take care of my body and sexual health.....