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8/23/19, 3:48 PM
If you hadn’t said it was your first NSFW story. I wouldn’t have known.
ForgottenCradle
8/23/19, 2:49 PM
this was perfect hot. hope there will be more
Anonymous
8/23/19, 2:34 PM
Incredible!!!
Anonymous
8/23/19, 1:49 PM
Interesting story, and a bit confusing at times--but I saw the overall thread. So where was the castration? Initally I thought Ace was going to get neutered at the Pet Spa, then I thought Jack was going to get it in retaliation for what he did to Ace. As for "real pup" vs "man pup", that was never an issue for me and I really enjoyed the Author's style in making it seem that way even though it was all men. The story line was interesting, but the execution choppy, which is why some readers were confused. Sort of like on Chopped (no pun intended!) where the chef develops an excellent flavor profile, but undercooks the meat 😉
Anonymous
8/23/19, 1:23 PM
Nice... Bittersweet but nice. With a sad edge of post apocalptic visions
Anonymous
8/23/19, 1:00 PM
love twink tops and bottom daddies..this site could use more!
8/23/19, 12:40 PM
rubber some always kind of been the guy whose narratives tend to be very strong. Remember his debut story is basically a bunch of guys sitting in chairs experiencing something. detached and surreal to mass dehumanization sensual duck thing? totallybhis thing and I won't why a good thriller turns me on which is why I've always liked hypnosis and mind Factory as a story element. and in the explicit sex what's the angle on how it's working the line towards it for whatever function and that fits. Especially when other elements that aren't necessarily needed just for the sex or necessarily that's add on to the fetish or complete the Narrative. of what's going on
JockPupTraxxx
8/23/19, 12:11 PM
I think I'd like this club.
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
8/23/19, 11:45 AM
Very nice & romantic. I wish I could find this forest to walk through.
Anonymous
8/23/19, 9:15 AM
Phenomenal
8/23/19, 6:59 AM
With each chapter it is getting better and better. I can't hardly wait for the rest. Hopefully there will be a lot of brother on brother action.
AgainstMyWill
8/23/19, 6:09 AM
Oh my God, this story is so hot I think my brain melted. Awesome idea, and amazing execution.
Anonymous
8/23/19, 5:58 AM
we've got an M. Night Shyamalan on our hands lol. interesting story you certainly kept me guessing about where it was going.
Martin
8/23/19, 4:55 AM
Mr. Anon: > Whoa, red flags with the flashback. Minors shouldn’t be shown in sexual situations. It's not up to you to show any red flags! The story is fine!
Elm
8/23/19, 4:46 AM
Loved it! if you are looking for other members of the pack, maybe Beast, the Hulk or Hercules? :p
8/23/19, 4:33 AM
MarvelHypnoDude You are welcome :) Wonder who will be next to join the pack :D
Anonymous
8/23/19, 4:32 AM
I'm loving this series. Can't wait to see where this goes!
Tight_slave
8/23/19, 3:44 AM
it's so hot, i can't resist i need to cum
Anonymous
8/23/19, 3:37 AM
Nothing beats reading the wonderful X-men run and then reading this marvelous story to relax and cum. Okay, your writing isn't perfect but you get the most important thing: Get me to travel within the story. Many Marvel writers can't get what you do here. PS: When the Bitch... erm... The Beast will join the pack? I Would love to read about this.
8/23/19, 3:04 AM
there's something thrilling about the encounter at the office. let's step into the territory in realizing your kind of watching a display of a lesser man's harem only he's not so much lesser. And then of course there's how his submissiveness kicks in after he's being taken advantage of by shorthorn better for sisters that sing blue ball interrupt us when the ball shows up you really got into this one
Anonymous
8/23/19, 12:13 AM
Whoa, red flags with the flashback. Minors shouldn't be shown in sexual situations.
Your Soldier
8/22/19, 9:35 PM
such a great chapter again, i can't wait of what happen next, conversions are the best !!
MarvelHypnoDude
8/22/19, 8:49 PM
Belti Thank you so much
Anonymous
8/22/19, 7:54 PM
I'd love to hear about what his life was like after this. like a college or full time good boy
Anonymous
8/22/19, 7:01 PM
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Anonymous
8/22/19, 5:35 PM
Can't wait to see what happens next. The corruption, man. You get me every time
8/22/19, 4:23 PM
My favorite vignette. I really enjoyed the way the landlord toyed with the helpless student. His unawareness to what was going was so hot.
8/22/19, 3:16 PM
Lovely; could use a wrap-up chapter
Anonymous
8/22/19, 3:10 PM
Excellent work
Anonymous
8/22/19, 3:09 PM
Where can we find more of your work? This is perfect.