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absman420
8/25/19, 11:11 AM
I'm writing a story about an ancient fertility god unleashed on a modern world --- it's called "PHOLUS" and I'm about a third of the way through it as I type this comment. Just a one-off right now, but I like what I'm developing a lot -- a ton of potential. (shrug) Who knows w me...?
Anonymous
8/25/19, 11:00 AM
Want to see Big Bear get a lot bigger and hairier.
Anonymous
8/25/19, 8:01 AM
So hot! MORE PLEASE!
Slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
8/25/19, 5:36 AM
Always good to be a Himbo for any Man wanting one!
Anonymous
8/25/19, 5:28 AM
A more genteel,fae Pollination
8/25/19, 4:51 AM
> One of the best transformation stories I’ve read on here, great writing! Thank you! \^w\^ > very well written, not only hot, but fitting the mode of a real horror story Haha, if you think *THIS* is a horror story, just wait 'till I finish my Halloween story XD
Anonymous
8/25/19, 2:58 AM
As always, great story and curious to see what you're going to post next.
Anonymous
8/25/19, 1:42 AM
omg I loved this story. the screens everywhere was perfect as well as the struggle it kept me in the edge till I came.
Anonymous
8/25/19, 12:09 AM
this has been my favorite story on the site in a while. I would love beast or hulk added to the pack. maybe the tinkerer could make it so that wolverine or sabertooths bodies create the pheromone that enslaves them this way they stay slaves and they can create more slaves for the Alpha.
8/24/19, 11:56 PM
WoW Simply exciting! I love how you describe how they can't take their eyes off the screens so naturally and descriptively. A good story!! :)
ForgottenCradle
8/24/19, 10:53 PM
please,please,PLEASE don't let this end here on a cliffhanger
Anonymous
8/24/19, 10:35 PM
Would love to see more of Holstein!
Lusty Stallion
8/24/19, 9:11 PM
Perfect
Anonymous
8/24/19, 9:01 PM
very well written, not only hot, but fitting the mode of a real horror story.
8/24/19, 8:54 PM
Simply ... my God ... please follow him ...
Anonymous
8/24/19, 7:47 PM
Glad the series is going forward. This chapter seems less focused than prior chapters on reaching Steve's goal.
Hypnojock18
8/24/19, 7:47 PM
Hot Hot Story!! Gotta be more. Gotta see Big Bear smoking his big maduro while he breeds his pig boi
Anonymous
8/24/19, 7:45 PM
Good on Jersey for getting away. Men like the Bull are the worst.
B-A
8/24/19, 7:36 PM
Would love to see a sequel where Guernsey looks for Jersey.
ForgottenCradle
8/24/19, 6:59 PM
I am in love with this the gorilla family is amazing and you even turned all of this into a good cause for society
Anonymous
8/24/19, 6:34 PM
This reads a lot like Baralai's storyteller but shorter.
Anonymous
8/24/19, 5:35 PM
how did i miss this new chapter?! web wonder's ally has no idea what he's about to blunder into!
8/24/19, 2:52 PM
I woke up slowly, fantasizing about something very like this, then you gave us this absolute gift. Thank you so much.
Anonymous
8/24/19, 1:26 PM
This is an amazing series, and you're a fantastic writer Twan! Can't wait to see more, thank you so much for posting this!
8/24/19, 12:40 PM
it was really hot how much quicker than the other Kyle gave in to being a horny obedient good boy.
ForgottenCradle
8/24/19, 11:10 AM
a promising start
ForgottenCradle
8/24/19, 10:59 AM
oof, Henry is a lovely monster great chapter
8/24/19, 10:13 AM
Sorry, man. I don't follow unknown links -- I've learned that lesson before. Post your stuff here and I'll gladly read it.
Anonymous
8/24/19, 8:12 AM
beautiful ending! great great great story!!!!
allabouttheeyes@yandex.com
8/24/19, 8:02 AM
I'm glad you are enjoying it. I have already started the next chapter and it is from Brendan's perspective. Hopefully it won't take too long to publish.