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8/31/19, 9:58 PM
Another excellent hot chapter! Interesting to find that Unit Dan has partly caused all this to happen. Can't wait to see what comes next!
jeep4191@gmail.com
8/31/19, 9:34 PM
Malskin, I think you will be pleased where unit Dan ends up at the end of this little story... thanks for continuing yo read! Bulk, glad you liked it! Hope you keep reading!
Anonymous
8/31/19, 9:16 PM
aww! that's really sweet ❤️
blankbot
8/31/19, 9:11 PM
Short, sweet, and highly erotic. Nicely done.
Bulk
8/31/19, 9:08 PM
OMG Classic Sci-Fi plot twist!! YES
malskin
8/31/19, 8:38 PM
I for one hopes that GREAT LEADER, BLESSED BE, find out about a misfuntioning Unit 2 and sends an earlier that expected download to that unit and totally corrects its programing, in facts makes it the lead and head of all unit 2's ye again have to say great writing
Aug 31, 2019
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8/31/19, 7:51 PM
GREAT short story! Nice, quick story arc!
Anonymous
8/31/19, 4:23 PM
Great finish to a great series. Love your writing!
Anonymous
8/31/19, 2:00 PM
Would love this to continue! I love the thought of becoming a mindless suited office drone.
8/31/19, 2:19 AM
Another excellent part! I feel a little sad for the aunt unit, and that poor unit Dan didn't recognize what was happening until it was too late. Interesing that the unit became a normal male unit 7. I guess they are the only type of 7 needed so it makes sense
8/31/19, 2:18 AM
Ooh, the units malfunction gets more interesting. And now it's learned some of how it works and the effects it has. Do the other units that it swaps with also become defective? Or is their designation simply replaced and they continue on as a normal unit of their new type?
8/31/19, 2:17 AM
Thanks for the complement. I'm honored that you think so highly of my writing. I don't write very much, and what I do write usually comes to me in one big burst. To keep a story going like you are is something I find hard, and you show great skill as a writer too. Your stories are excellent!
8/31/19, 1:54 AM
Unusual, but quite cute too.
Bibimbap
8/31/19, 1:02 AM
Any chance to read a follow up of this hot story? it's quite good!
8/31/19, 12:17 AM
really good...
jeep4191@gmail.com
8/30/19, 10:56 PM
i have a few other characters planned for Relivit, so other stories will be coming! I just have a few other ideas i want to explore first (including the final parts of I am unit 7) Mdlftr, perhaps i will do an alternate ending for Von at some point in the future, you gave dome great ideas!
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
8/30/19, 9:51 PM
I would love my Bluetooth speakers to be hacked like that
Mdlftr
8/30/19, 9:50 PM
I enjoyed this thoughtful ending. I wonder what would have happened had Von decided at the stage he was at, to try Relivit from the current moment forward. What if, instead of going back and changing the past, he changed his potential future, optioning to be something other than a muscular porn star? Where might that have gone? What if he had children in the future? What if he had gone back and Mike had survived the car accident but been crippled? What would life have been like then? A lot of fertile ground in the "if only..." arena. Creative story idea!
Anonymous
8/30/19, 9:45 PM
don't forget ant-man's powers are to grow and shrink
jeep4191@gmail.com
8/30/19, 8:54 PM
thank you! This is a fun story to write!
Anonymous
8/30/19, 8:36 PM
wow...this is getting really good. love the entire universe created here. excited to see what happens to Unit Dan!
8/30/19, 5:40 PM
Nope, completely coincidental
Mdlftr
8/30/19, 4:17 PM
Well written, interesting premise! Please continue!
Ed
8/30/19, 4:00 PM
I was forced to read this as I lay on my bed locked in my chastity cage with my friend edging me
Anonymous
8/30/19, 2:49 PM
is this about the site spam attack?
Anonymous
8/30/19, 1:36 PM
Wow, hot story!
Martin
8/30/19, 1:07 PM
Your stories are simply one of a kind. I love to read them!
May 19, 2017
Anonymous
8/30/19, 12:22 PM
woooof!
8/29/19, 9:14 PM
I really love this series so far, this last chapter has been really great. If you are planning to bring Star Lord in, I hope Drax comes along too xd.
8/29/19, 8:25 PM
I enjoy a little bit of real story telling in my smut. Getting emotionally involved heightens everything for me. I also really like when stories have a good end from the perspective of the original character. I hope Dan finds a way back to himself, not as he was exactly but better. Maybe he can become GREAT LEADER, BLESSED BE, though I completely understand if the opposite happens.