Recent Comments

Willie Cici
9/10/19, 3:57 AM
If if continues, where does it go? I'm open to suggestions. Please!!!
Anonymous
9/10/19, 3:02 AM
hope that Tim would also wear the mask too : )
Sep 6, 2019
cigarcubatx
9/10/19, 2:12 AM
Loved this, very nice.
9/10/19, 2:11 AM
Loved it! The slow alteration of reality!
9/10/19, 1:59 AM
I'm gonna second what M said. The whole forth wall break had me fast reading and going "really". I'm also hoping for our main guy getting involved personally as their dom top and fucking them. The whole watch from afar is only so interesting, especially when his cock can go into the holes of his two new good boys. I've really enjoyed the story but I want him playing with some subs. And not from afar.
Fantastic
9/10/19, 1:54 AM
another awesome chapter but now im confused on what would happen next
M.
9/9/19, 11:58 PM
So, I have loved this series so far, with only one critique of the whole thing. I don't really love the comments where he sort of breaks the 4th wall and speaks to the audience about the website, it sort of brings me out of the fantasy. I just don't think those segments flow with the rest of each chapter. Otherwise, I really have enjoyed this so far. One last comment about this particular chapter and the next: from the way everything has been written so far, I thought (and was hoping) that the next step would be to introduce himself as the Master top (or Dom or whatever) into the scenario with the existing two test subjects. Moving toward a "town/society/world" sized stature and having a giant orgy type scenario or whatever you meant by, "That one thing? Everyone else. Every. Last. One." will really take me out of it, and I probably won't read that or further chapters, which is a shame, because I have loved the series so far.
Anonymous
9/9/19, 11:41 PM
Wow... THAT was HOT as hell!
Anonymous
9/9/19, 11:01 PM
does it continue? great start!!
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
9/9/19, 8:51 PM
I wish I could find this on Amazon.
Trick
9/9/19, 7:21 PM
Great adaptation to the story! I always love how this story grew legs and ran. Everyone who has taken it on has made it better. Just like Hypnothrill, I look forward to your stories. I can't tell you how much it made my day that you've added something special to this universe. I look forward to what you write next!
firesix
9/9/19, 7:18 PM
Favorite story reworked by my favorite author. How could I ever complain?
Jan 13, 2019
Anonymous
9/9/19, 6:35 PM
Hot. The writing wasn't perfect but it made me nut anyway. Also skinheads today arent racist anymore
Anonymous
9/9/19, 5:02 PM
A great adaptation of an oft reworked classic. My dick twitched as soon as i read the title and throbbed the whole way through.
Anonymous
9/9/19, 4:14 PM
would love to see the next part with more gear theft!
9/9/19, 2:50 PM
Great adaptation! Leather bears aren't really my fetish, but I still loved all the little touches you added to the story.
Anonymous
9/9/19, 12:10 PM
My mind is in turmoil. I... Feel deceived. I don't know what to think anymore, my faith is shaken but to me, the Sun gives birth to Snakes. There must be a natural order. I still submit to the Pharaoh. Willingly. Commander Abdamelek will learn of his deception. Snakes aren't associated with deceptive tactics for no reason. Never the less, something I actually always appreciate about you is that you actually write well. Pacing, grammar, description, plot. Perhaps because you actually take time to think things out unlike other writers.
Anonymous
9/9/19, 12:00 PM
wow
Ng5hvlo4
9/9/19, 10:54 AM
The Crazy Week series is my favorite story to read; wishing there was a rubber drone version...The bear series take on it was very hot and I like the details.
Tox
9/9/19, 9:44 AM
God damn that was good, and I clicked it the moment I saw "jawhite_miller" as the author. your stories are always amazing, glad to see you writing again!
Anonymous
9/9/19, 8:45 AM
I'm just curious about the three subjects before Matt. Would want to know what happened to them...hehehe
cigarcubatx
9/9/19, 8:41 AM
Haven't read it yet, but seeing "jawhitemiller" got my dick hard preemptively.
Anonymous
9/9/19, 8:25 AM
a sweet revenge? Patrick did a great job!!
Anonymous
9/9/19, 7:50 AM
I could have launched a business to reshape nerds into a walking cock for both men and women, who wants a sex pistol companion :) They can rent those pistols to others and get subscription fee, too.
Anonymous
9/9/19, 4:52 AM
An early day of ShredExtreme!! I really appreciate that the chemists did not listen to her ; P
9/9/19, 4:41 AM
This is an incredibly hot reworking of a classic.
Anonymous
9/9/19, 4:15 AM
Interesting twist at the end!!!
Sep 8, 2019
Anonymous
9/9/19, 4:14 AM
As usual, great story!!!
9/9/19, 3:37 AM
Thank you everyone!! I appreciate the kind words. I left it open ended as I'm sure I'll be inspired soon for part 2 ;). Thus far I have yet to tackle it, but I have some ideas. :) Thanks again!