Recent Comments

1/8/20, 8:33 PM
Thanks, Lytcom. You know, I wouldn't actually say that the characters' personalities get erased, especially since they're able to retain enough of their old selves to recruit their former friends in other frats. They're just proud to get their new "slave names" because it marks their allegiance to the Master.
1/8/20, 8:16 PM
Hypnothrill, You are among the very best writers on this site. Never forget it. Your stories are always so well written. This story is unfortunatly not my favourit because of the slave names. I much prefer changing personalities rather than erasing them, but that is just my preference. Keep up the amazing work.
Ben
1/8/20, 8:14 PM
I love it, it's the perfect ending to the series.
transformheaven
1/8/20, 8:13 PM
A new installment of Good Morning Blokes?! Count me in! Thanks for this hot story Hypnothrill. I liked it :)
1/8/20, 7:54 PM
Actually, the very next story I'm planning to post is another installment of "Good Morning Blokes."
Fucking HOT
1/8/20, 7:37 PM
Nice nasty way to turn roomies gay & keep 'em that way.
Anonymous
1/8/20, 7:04 PM
excellent story!
Anonymous
1/8/20, 6:43 PM
Excellent work...Thanks
May 31, 2005
Anonymous
1/8/20, 6:19 PM
This is so hot. I have jacked off to this several times. More like this one please!
Anonymous
1/8/20, 5:34 PM
this was a very sexy end to the story. although now that it's over im kinda itching for more stories involving the others.
Demospam7@hotmail.nl
1/8/20, 5:26 PM
Nice story! Would like to see more!
Anonymous
1/8/20, 4:47 PM
will we see more of Good Morning Blokes and Face Up Cock Up?
Anonymous
1/8/20, 4:17 PM
Great story! Loved it!!!!
Anonymous
1/8/20, 4:16 PM
I really would encourage the author to finish this. It's so extremely erotic and obviously a lot of work went into it, but it just leaves us hanging. Please, finish this up Jonathan! It's wonderful!
Anonymous
1/8/20, 3:18 PM
God I HATE those Tik Tok boys with a passion! Please continue this one!
corinthian
1/8/20, 3:01 PM
Nicely done - thanks! Lots of opportunities here....
Anonymous
1/8/20, 2:09 PM
is the next part ready?
Anonymous
1/8/20, 1:36 PM
Will there be another chapter? Please continue!
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
1/8/20, 1:09 PM
Wish that was me in Hunter's position.
1/8/20, 1:06 PM
Boy, if there's ever a story that needs a "hypnotist gets ensared by his own hypnotic program" twist, it's this one. What would make this really hot is if sanctimonious Jeremiah got exposed to his own subliminals and turned into the sort of dumb, exhibitionist TikTok boy he despises. Maybe in the sequel?
Your soldier
1/8/20, 11:35 AM
great chapter i cannot wait for more!
fingrfethr
1/8/20, 6:31 AM
Thanks for finding a new angle and writing the characters so well. Bravo!
Anonymous
1/8/20, 4:30 AM
I loved it. Your protoganist doesnt even realize he's changed. So hot!!!
jackson
1/8/20, 3:56 AM
so i started reading stories at the mcstoryarchive, and found that I actually got turned on more by the gay stories than the straight and lesbian ones. which led me here. and i jsut wanted to say that this story was exceptional in my opinion. thank you for sharing it.
Anonymous
1/8/20, 2:03 AM
More pleaseeee
1/7/20, 11:57 PM
Can't wait to see where this is goingl amused by the constant shifts between normal and tranced states, and how they're placed within the narrative.
1/7/20, 11:47 PM
I'm kind'a fond of a slower burn, but the elements of the story, thus far, are really engaging
1/7/20, 11:36 PM
I'm really getting into the subtlety of the indoctrination process; Master must really be skilled in the "art" of NLP. Another great start to your usual storycraft!
JerkinBeforeWork
1/7/20, 6:58 PM
One of my favorite stories for a nice jerk. Thanks dude!
Growinggeek@gmail.com
1/7/20, 6:37 PM
This was a great continuation, great job!