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Anonymous
1/16/20, 7:20 PM
Excellent addition thanks!
Anonymous
1/16/20, 3:33 PM
That was incredible. I read it twice. I'm still hard!!!!!
Anonymous
1/16/20, 3:20 PM
Great story! Great series!!! Loved it. Loved the way the boys were so under control.
autodream
1/16/20, 2:47 PM
I messaged you Martin, thanks!! And yes, eye contact is very important. Especially in hypnosis... Or trying to make people feel bad while you accept a blow job from them ;) hahaha!!
LongtimeFan
1/16/20, 12:33 PM
This is an awesome story! I love the idea of cursed magical items. Only one small suggestion: masturbating on a bus WOULD get the police involved (a charge of public indecency, even if the person is a minor), so it seems unlikely that none of the other passengers would call 911. But then we're talking about an enchanted ring that seizes control of people's hands, so maybe realism isn't the problem. :p Again, great piece!
1/16/20, 9:55 AM
That was great fun.
malskin
1/16/20, 8:56 AM
Great New Chapter thanks - in it you said about the unconverted be good to see a chapter on catching one and the process they go through
Anonymous
1/16/20, 7:28 AM
Yessssssssss thank you so much to both you and the gentlemen donating! One of my favourite stories ever. So happy to see it continued. Free tuggies for both. With eye contact!
Mr.T
1/16/20, 6:48 AM
It’s a good story. Keep going! I can’t wait for the next story.
Anonymous
1/16/20, 5:09 AM
This story is incredibly satisfying (for some of us). Thank you very much!
Anonymous
1/16/20, 4:33 AM
definitely enjoy your work - esp these twisted takes on pop culture and mass mind control. also love the Take That ... implications. ;)
Anonymous
1/16/20, 2:52 AM
interesting story. look Looking forward to seeing how how this plays out.
1/16/20, 2:52 AM
Great start! I can only imagine what's gonna happen in the next chapter!!
1/16/20, 2:50 AM
Definitely like the conversion in the police station, but curious about how the station became a conversion chamber. Maybe write a story about how that happened.
1/16/20, 2:48 AM
Definitely like the work, converting the police is something that I like to see.
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
1/16/20, 2:38 AM
I just said Austin because it was the first city in Texas that came to my mind
Martin
1/15/20, 11:55 PM
Hey Autodream, I just realized that your story is split over two author accounts (autodream and iautodream) and that there are many parts of your "The Island" story line - don't you want to put them all into one series? And if you want me to join your accounts into one, I'd also do that for you. Just let me know at martin@gayspiralstories.com
Autodream
1/15/20, 11:26 PM
Most times I write a story, I usually reset Jese's resistance and sexuality scale. The island chapters are meant to follow him through multiple encounters, but are seperate canon from other random stories. I imagine it as, younger me experiencing hypnosis and gay for the first time in different scenarios. I do first person because of the hypnosis. I feel like it allows me to cheat in what is going through Jese's mind. I roleplay in 3rd, Jese in first.
1/15/20, 10:32 PM
@joaopomilio: Not sure if there are a lot of cowboys left in Austin, but that's an interesting idea.
1/15/20, 10:30 PM
@David S, I'm currently working on a story based on ideas from this chapter. I hope it will help alienkiller and other aspiring writers see one possible model for how they can expand their plot ideas into a fully fledged compelling story.
1/15/20, 8:23 PM
love to chat to u about your stories blufdude@aol.com
Anonymous
1/15/20, 7:15 PM
Missing a chance for a lot of erotic details. Case in point, just using the last paragraph: "Then a duplicate formed of the boy"...That ONE sentence could be fully expanded into a chapter on its own, or at least a couple of hot paragraphs. You have a decent foundation for a story, as they say the devil is in the details...you need to expand the picture.
Anonymous
1/15/20, 5:59 PM
очень понравился,хочу новые рассказы
dm300charmed
1/15/20, 4:46 PM
From UK Love this! please continue.
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
1/15/20, 3:43 PM
also I hope you do a new Magazine Sex Diary? this time in Austin, Texas, with a Cowboy?
1/15/20, 3:37 PM
Hot stories! Wish there could be more
1/15/20, 3:11 PM
The most fun part bout this yarn was the punchline...hilarious! I also enjoyed the slow build effect
1/15/20, 2:52 PM
A vastly superior continuation, and loads of fun!
1/15/20, 2:40 PM
Usually I love your stories, Hypnothrill, and this one has several interesting approaches melded together; however, the languaging seems a little forced to me. Granted , I'm not even remotely British, and those who are may have a different perspective (and thus, I differ to them), but I do at least respect the idea of it.
Anonymous
1/15/20, 2:27 PM
I love it!! please continue