Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/18/20, 1:15 AM
There have been a number of stories with alien takeovers. But personally I never felt like they clicked. Maybe I just don't like the idea or the writing, but the stories just never have the same impact that basic mind control stories do.
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
1/18/20, 1:15 AM
that was fun, but I would like to see how the ring handles a mass transformation situation
Jan 18, 2020
1/18/20, 1:01 AM
Great Growing Pains reference at the end.
1/17/20, 11:52 PM
Great story, love to chat about it. Blufman1 on here read my story skin and solicitor, tell me what u think blufdude@aol.com
1/17/20, 11:51 PM
Спасибо, что понравился мой рассказ
1/17/20, 11:30 PM
Oh I will. I will do my best to find time. submitted a story today.
A
1/17/20, 11:15 PM
This story had me rubbing my rubber-clad crotch in a frenzy with Aaron's pace. Great story! Please write more! Perhaps some nipple suckers or something next? More toys as they explore and possibly want to spread it? Do they go back to the girl for more?
Anonymous
1/17/20, 10:10 PM
great story, sign me up too!!!!
Anonymous
1/17/20, 10:02 PM
Had a fantasy scenario like this where the forced chastity makes him so pent up that it causes disturbing physical mutations
Anonymous
1/17/20, 6:41 PM
Does it count if he cums hands free?
Anonymous
1/17/20, 5:28 PM
I like your writing style, it's good. So, continue please.
Nov 30, 2008
Stephen
1/17/20, 5:12 PM
Please tell me there's a continuation to this story!!!
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
1/17/20, 3:51 PM
will we see part 3 soon?
SplitInfinitive
1/17/20, 3:26 PM
I love the imagery of two masculine men both total sluts for 69ing, leaking everywhere and getting stuffed with meat. and I love how men here both love sucking and getting sucked. I hope you keep writing more, this is great.
autodream
1/17/20, 2:32 PM
The story doesn't necessarily mean the end of ConnorXJesse. It could mean that an awkward partnership would potentially need to be formed to combat the overwhelming strength of the 3P's? Only time will tell... I think what happen with Jesse, is along with starting to enjoy, pleasure... He became additionally annoyed by how Connor tried to play both sides. The friend, and the hypnotist. He failed to be honest with Jesse, as compared to someone like Kevin who was very forward with what he wanted. I don't think I explored that, which probably would have happen before the 3P's, but Jesse would actually start to prefer people who were honest about their desire to fuck him.
SirD
1/17/20, 12:04 PM
love this series!!! i hope theres more to come.
Anonymous
1/17/20, 11:03 AM
I hope you have a lot of free time to write many story!
Anonymous
1/17/20, 8:19 AM
Would love to see more of this!
Alter
1/17/20, 6:31 AM
Great story keep up the hard work. Need to know what happens next and what plans Mr. Pollex has for Finn.
Anonymous
1/17/20, 6:15 AM
very well written and atmospheric.
Panos
1/17/20, 6:05 AM
Josmith, I love where this story is going, you are one my favorite authors. Please continue this great story!
Anonymous
1/17/20, 4:55 AM
Willie kept the spirit of the story going, using his own flair. I liked it!!
1/17/20, 4:44 AM
Perfect pace on the transformations. I loved how Andy and Clint transformed even with no details given of possible resistance and/or lustful acceptance. Just the result of the transformation against the short scene in the cafeteria was perfect, esp with Andy cutting his jeans. And many more chapters to go...thank you.
Max
1/17/20, 4:08 AM
it would be amazing if he actually got more items that the ring would force onto him, perhaps a necklace wich would control his mouth and neck movements, or make him say stuff he normally wouldn't say
Nik M
1/17/20, 2:21 AM
I disagree with those who are having issues with this story. I think irl a lot of straight guys do try to capitalize and tokenize gay culture, especially using apps like TikTok. I think it is hot to see them being used and transformed like in your story. I think if like this becomes a series and much later on you want a twist, it would be hot to see Jerimiah become a dumb tik tok slut too, but not until much later on and the others have all been transformed and used in various ways. The writing is also great. And the story is hot. I think it is great that you are confronting problematic issues in our culture in a fun and hot way. You definitely do not sound like an incel and I think that some people are just trying to troll you or stir drama, but you should keep writing how and what you want! :)
1/17/20, 12:45 AM
Looking forward to the next challenge to befall our Tommy! I feel this chapter was totally a golden shower scene but with a wee change, as it were. Very clever :)
Anonymous
1/17/20, 12:37 AM
I absolutely loved this😋 be awesome to see him trying to get used to his new body
1/17/20, 12:11 AM
Thanks all for the lovely comments :) @LongtimeFan thanks for the feedback! Will there be a sequel? Maybe, if I can straighten out some of the backstory. No promises yet. @S. Q. Neemie I'm sure there's plenty of room in this town (though not in Phalanx, Minnesota) for another magic ring store! The magic transforming store has been done before - I was reminded of a series that abracadabra wrote. https://www.nifty.org/nifty/gay/sf-fantasy/jockhole-transformations/jockhole-transformations-1
1/17/20, 12:02 AM
Well how very interesting, and sexy. First, welcome back. Second, I always loved the Island and its cool to see it again. Now, that said, I do have to admit I hoped Connor was involved as I like the way he interacted with Jesse. That said the two becoming good boys together is very hot. So yeah, sexy stuff!
1/17/20, 12:02 AM
This is excellent . You do a great job at building the tension and keeping the character real even as he pitches over the edge of sexytimes. I've wanted to do a series about a magic ring shop that forces dudes into gay situations, and now I feel like I've been beaten to the punch (so to speak). Well done.