Recent Comments

1/6/24, 10:31 PM
Hoping for more soon, but I kind of like the meta-story, that the longer it takes Edlam to add more, the longer Jason is just obediently and eagerly eating out Chester's ass in the CEO office, which gets me going even without new chapters :P.
1/6/24, 8:37 PM
This is really hot <3

1/6/24, 9:19 PM
@[timpu713](/user/show/10045954) Will I respond to every comment? MAYBE! Thank you :magic_wand::heartbeat: :tropical_drink:
1/6/24, 7:52 PM
Not usually a kink I'm super into, but damn that was really well written!

1/6/24, 9:18 PM
@[AgentCoyner](/user/show/10008527) All I want is to be patted on the head and told I did a good job (thank you!)
1/5/24, 6:16 PM
By far my favorite part. I love seeing how quickly and hard cap falls!

1/6/24, 8:43 PM
@[Napalm](/user/show/908052) No hero is immune to a good hypno-spanking, not even Captain America himself!
1/6/24, 7:47 PM
Great job. Love the obliviousness, and stoked for Yuan that he gets to join the meathead club.

Wakeup
1/6/24, 8:14 PM
@[Derek Williams](/user/show/175661) Thank you Derek! There’s something quite humorous about writing oblivious characters.
John
1/6/24, 7:45 PM
I know I am a nipple pig !’
1/6/24, 8:18 AM
Wow, what can I say? That was amazing! I loved the premise and the slow burn was really well done. I would love to see more in this universe.

1/6/24, 7:04 PM
@[Ruffcub](/user/show/21211) Thank you!!! The magical stuff crept in with revisions, and maybe I'll revisit this world in the future. Thanks for the encouragement :heart_eyes:
1/6/24, 3:18 AM
God damn, I really loved this one. Where's that pop-up bar heading next?

1/6/24, 7:00 PM
@[Dubbel](/user/show/913842) Thank you! I avoided listing too much of the bar's menu because I didn't want to set too many expectations... but I'm glad you liked it! Means a lot.
Anonymous
1/6/24, 2:22 AM
Great story! Loved the end.

1/6/24, 6:58 PM
@Anonymous Thank you! Admit that I get nervous before posting stuff, so I appreciate the love.
1/6/24, 4:50 PM
Thank you guys tried to get it out before Christmas but with being busy and getting sick a while ago couldn't get this sorry out fast enough. Working on the last chapter as well and a submission for the new contest.
Feb 4, 2023
1/6/24, 4:33 PM
Don't threaten me with a good time! 💖😘
Feb 4, 2023
1/6/24, 12:48 PM
Excellent read! Now I'm suddenly craving a haircut. Love all the themes used, elegantly woven to create this transformation. Glad Jackie has no regrets.

Wakeup
1/6/24, 4:15 PM
@[astrologus](/user/show/1037572) Thank you! I’m sure we can get you a similar haircut 😏
Apr 28, 2022
SpeedoLuver
1/6/24, 3:23 PM
The king was closet Case gay in need of a serious buttfucking. The Orc sure bitched him and his men. 🤢🥵🤑😈
KhrizzzToePhur
1/6/24, 5:21 AM
Fucking Fantastic 😋 I shot my seed 3 seperately times reading this the first time through. It's super sexy and satisfying 💦 Can't wait for more chapters to continue. One with Liam and one back at Jeremiah's home with the cops. 😈 Might I even add that this adapted to a comic strip would be worth while 😉

1/6/24, 2:07 PM
@KhrizzzToePhur I’m glad you enjoyed the story, 😊 I think there’s an opportunity to explore the Liam storyline, as well as the cops too. I like your idea of creating a comic. Thanks for the feedback.
Jan 5, 2024
Piper
1/6/24, 1:20 PM
I like the second half a lot as you add a lot of fun details on the altered reality. Fun character work as well. It's fun and hot. That said I feel the start of the story needed a little more set up on events. Or just needed to be cut as it doesn't impact the second half as he wakes up new years day
Titan
1/6/24, 12:54 PM
Yes, please keep going. Not into everything here but for some reason your story has me hooked and I’m in.
1/6/24, 12:06 PM
Why do i have a feeling this would be a very hot series. Cant wait to read more from this.
Jan 5, 2024
Jonanator
1/6/24, 7:00 AM
You should continue this story
needy faggot
1/6/24, 4:10 AM
I love your story, although I am obsessed with being the submissive for the black master. i am Your cocksucking faggot. Needy fag.

1/6/24, 6:13 AM
@needy faggot By all means. Sex is the ultimate power dynamic and it doesn't really matter who, or what race, is the authority figure who turns you on.
1/5/24, 2:50 PM
Great chapter & love their slogan lol!

1/6/24, 6:11 AM
@[Kelly](/user/show/933626) Yes, "I will stand on my feet for the right to get on my knees" should be on the lips of every black school boy.
1/6/24, 3:59 AM
Super hot story! I want more!
Elm
1/6/24, 3:21 AM
A great start! Love your stories!
1/6/24, 3:02 AM
This is an interesting start to a series and with the Danger Boy series and the Handler's Collection it's a welcome addition. I'm a bit busy but I may take up your offer to expand this world.
Nov 15, 2022
1/6/24, 12:37 AM
Hope you continue this!
Anonymous
11/25/23, 9:02 PM
Do you still have an appetite to finish this?

11/28/23, 9:08 PM
@Anonymous It's def there! I've just been CRAZY busy with work, friends, and daily chores leaving me less than horny enough to write effectively. Once I am, I'll be spending half my writing bug on my commission and Sinfulfillment. But I'm eager to get this story unfolded because, well, I'm quite proud of it!

Anonymous
1/6/24, 12:22 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) :(
1/6/24, 12:04 AM
Loved this!
1/6/24, 12:00 AM
This is so amazingly hot!
1/5/24, 11:57 PM
Please I need another chapter!
Anonymous
1/5/24, 10:27 PM
Lets see poor Adrien ravaged by his big brother and the guards,maybe?