Recent Comments

1/6/24, 8:37 PM
This is really hot <3

1/6/24, 9:19 PM
@[timpu713](/user/show/10045954) Will I respond to every comment? MAYBE! Thank you :magic_wand::heartbeat: :tropical_drink:
1/6/24, 7:52 PM
Not usually a kink I'm super into, but damn that was really well written!

1/6/24, 9:18 PM
@[AgentCoyner](/user/show/10008527) All I want is to be patted on the head and told I did a good job (thank you!)
1/5/24, 6:16 PM
By far my favorite part. I love seeing how quickly and hard cap falls!

1/6/24, 8:43 PM
@[Napalm](/user/show/908052) No hero is immune to a good hypno-spanking, not even Captain America himself!
1/6/24, 7:47 PM
Great job. Love the obliviousness, and stoked for Yuan that he gets to join the meathead club.

Wakeup
1/6/24, 8:14 PM
@[Derek Williams](/user/show/175661) Thank you Derek! There’s something quite humorous about writing oblivious characters.
John
1/6/24, 7:45 PM
I know I am a nipple pig !’
1/6/24, 8:18 AM
Wow, what can I say? That was amazing! I loved the premise and the slow burn was really well done. I would love to see more in this universe.

1/6/24, 7:04 PM
@[Ruffcub](/user/show/21211) Thank you!!! The magical stuff crept in with revisions, and maybe I'll revisit this world in the future. Thanks for the encouragement :heart_eyes:
1/6/24, 3:18 AM
God damn, I really loved this one. Where's that pop-up bar heading next?

1/6/24, 7:00 PM
@[Dubbel](/user/show/913842) Thank you! I avoided listing too much of the bar's menu because I didn't want to set too many expectations... but I'm glad you liked it! Means a lot.
Anonymous
1/6/24, 2:22 AM
Great story! Loved the end.

1/6/24, 6:58 PM
@Anonymous Thank you! Admit that I get nervous before posting stuff, so I appreciate the love.
1/6/24, 4:50 PM
Thank you guys tried to get it out before Christmas but with being busy and getting sick a while ago couldn't get this sorry out fast enough. Working on the last chapter as well and a submission for the new contest.
Feb 4, 2023
1/6/24, 4:33 PM
Don't threaten me with a good time! 💖😘
Feb 4, 2023
1/6/24, 12:48 PM
Excellent read! Now I'm suddenly craving a haircut. Love all the themes used, elegantly woven to create this transformation. Glad Jackie has no regrets.

Wakeup
1/6/24, 4:15 PM
@[astrologus](/user/show/1037572) Thank you! I’m sure we can get you a similar haircut 😏
Apr 28, 2022
SpeedoLuver
1/6/24, 3:23 PM
The king was closet Case gay in need of a serious buttfucking. The Orc sure bitched him and his men. 🤢🥵🤑😈
KhrizzzToePhur
1/6/24, 5:21 AM
Fucking Fantastic 😋 I shot my seed 3 seperately times reading this the first time through. It's super sexy and satisfying 💦 Can't wait for more chapters to continue. One with Liam and one back at Jeremiah's home with the cops. 😈 Might I even add that this adapted to a comic strip would be worth while 😉

1/6/24, 2:07 PM
@KhrizzzToePhur I’m glad you enjoyed the story, 😊 I think there’s an opportunity to explore the Liam storyline, as well as the cops too. I like your idea of creating a comic. Thanks for the feedback.
Jan 5, 2024
Piper
1/6/24, 1:20 PM
I like the second half a lot as you add a lot of fun details on the altered reality. Fun character work as well. It's fun and hot. That said I feel the start of the story needed a little more set up on events. Or just needed to be cut as it doesn't impact the second half as he wakes up new years day
Titan
1/6/24, 12:54 PM
Yes, please keep going. Not into everything here but for some reason your story has me hooked and I’m in.
1/6/24, 12:06 PM
Why do i have a feeling this would be a very hot series. Cant wait to read more from this.
Jan 5, 2024
Jonanator
1/6/24, 7:00 AM
You should continue this story
needy faggot
1/6/24, 4:10 AM
I love your story, although I am obsessed with being the submissive for the black master. i am Your cocksucking faggot. Needy fag.

1/6/24, 6:13 AM
@needy faggot By all means. Sex is the ultimate power dynamic and it doesn't really matter who, or what race, is the authority figure who turns you on.
1/5/24, 2:50 PM
Great chapter & love their slogan lol!

1/6/24, 6:11 AM
@[Kelly](/user/show/933626) Yes, "I will stand on my feet for the right to get on my knees" should be on the lips of every black school boy.
1/6/24, 3:59 AM
Super hot story! I want more!
Elm
1/6/24, 3:21 AM
A great start! Love your stories!
1/6/24, 3:02 AM
This is an interesting start to a series and with the Danger Boy series and the Handler's Collection it's a welcome addition. I'm a bit busy but I may take up your offer to expand this world.
Nov 15, 2022
1/6/24, 12:37 AM
Hope you continue this!
Anonymous
11/25/23, 9:02 PM
Do you still have an appetite to finish this?

11/28/23, 9:08 PM
@Anonymous It's def there! I've just been CRAZY busy with work, friends, and daily chores leaving me less than horny enough to write effectively. Once I am, I'll be spending half my writing bug on my commission and Sinfulfillment. But I'm eager to get this story unfolded because, well, I'm quite proud of it!

Anonymous
1/6/24, 12:22 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) :(
1/6/24, 12:04 AM
Loved this!
1/6/24, 12:00 AM
This is so amazingly hot!
1/5/24, 11:57 PM
Please I need another chapter!
Anonymous
1/5/24, 10:27 PM
Lets see poor Adrien ravaged by his big brother and the guards,maybe?
1/5/24, 10:18 PM
Love that Justin is changing and having a self realization.
1/5/24, 10:04 PM
The rimming is hot. Fun story!