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Jonanator
1/15/24, 8:02 PM
You should do more of this.

1/18/24, 8:11 PM
@Jonanator As I keep posting stories from my Tumblr, perhaps you'll see more ;) Thanks for you comment!
1/18/24, 7:45 PM
Thanks for your comments guys. Very much appreciated. Please make sure you rate using the rating scores section. It's a blunt tool, but it helps every writer understand their work better. -JT.
1/18/24, 7:39 PM
So good. Next chapter when? :smile:

1/18/24, 7:43 PM
@[Hurricane](/user/show/1255929) Thanks H. Very shortly.
Anonymous
1/18/24, 7:11 PM
Holy fuck! This is insane. So fucking hot. Talk about thirsty. More please!

1/18/24, 7:42 PM
@Anonymous Thanks A. Glad you enjoyed.
1/18/24, 3:20 PM
I loved this! Amazing, hit all my kinks! Hope there's more!

1/18/24, 7:41 PM
@[Anton729](/user/show/928205) Thanks A7. More is on the way.
1/18/24, 5:48 AM
Oh yes, this is awesome. Can't wait for more.

1/18/24, 7:41 PM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Thanks man. Soon enough.
1/18/24, 2:38 PM
First story that compelled me to leave a comment. Great writing, and incredibly hot story! I kept thinking Alan might turn out to be the bartender trying to get the boy to accept his new role willingly. Definitely would love to read more stories from you in this vein. Thanks for sharing!

1/18/24, 7:11 PM
@[Deviant Pup](/user/show/10004737) I love this comment so much. Thank you for reading and sharing! :sparkler:
1/18/24, 5:05 PM
This went exactly where I expected. Thank you

1/18/24, 6:38 PM
@[Anon](/user/show/910942) Your predictions are usually pretty accurate, so I'm not surprised :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye: Now, I wonder,... what comes next?
1/18/24, 4:01 PM
Wow this went places I didnt expect and I love it. I really cant wait for more.

1/18/24, 6:32 PM
@[Buck Whitman](/user/show/10001298) :grin: This particular series has really run away with itself! I'm really enjoying writing it, so it means a great deal to hear this too! Thanks!
1/18/24, 5:07 AM
This is a great premise, but I would have found the story hotter if it spent more time on characterization at the beginning. We learn almost nothing about the guys' relationships or their normal personalities, so their transformation into part of the hive doesn't have much impact.

Anonymous
1/18/24, 2:35 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) Good point, what if I start spreading it to "wanishing memories" when they become more and more pure alfas as being indoctrinated a re-programmed by their collective Hive mind as they fuse more and more to joint entity? For example when Jake lost his memory about family, still cares a big bead about his collective and is protective about Hive, Guardian protector Alfa. Other become seducing bitch Alfa, and you will see.