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Jan 7, 2022
1/8/22, 5:50 AM
Welcome back! So good to see you again here. Loving the story so far. Can't wait see see what's next.
1/8/22, 4:46 AM
I've been eagerly awaiting this update, and it didn't disappoint! Definitely enjoying the slow, methodical way that the baron is breaking both Tim and Finn down. And I absolutely loved the way Finn had a post-hypnotic suggestion to enthrall Timothy. The way Tim also described thoughts being driven from his head was also nicely done. I do hope we'll get to explore a bit more of this world you've created in the next chapter. I really loved how the first chapter drew you in to the period setting and the metal shop, and part of me would love to walk around the grounds of this estate and see how he's handling his toys within the setting you've established (and how all the other hypnotized lads interact with Finn and Tim). That said, I'm also eagerly looking forward to more of Tim and Finn's training! Regardless, excellent work!
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1/8/22, 3:43 AM
Can't believe I enjoyed this but did.
Jan 7, 2022
Willie Cici
1/8/22, 3:35 AM
I had to read this twice because I was afraid I missed something. This was great. I always enjoyed reading your entries. I could see this as a series. Can't wait to see where you take this.
Jan 6, 2022
Anonymous
1/8/22, 3:28 AM
Keep writing, Willie. Loved this short story!!!
1/8/22, 3:19 AM
Lol I love this story I can't wait to see how small our boy gets.
1/7/22, 9:26 AM
I think you got my tags! Quite the fun story, I liked the diagram of the house being the hypnotic device.

1/8/22, 3:01 AM
@Norismo If thats the case, Im glad you liked it!
Aug 25, 2020
1/8/22, 2:08 AM
How do i get sent they? When you said that "Most all the guards and technicians have been through it, the process." I Take a job as a technician. The process makes us, no able to talk about work, out side of work. Great job, I keep looking for more parts. Thank you
1/7/22, 11:53 PM
Absolutely amazing! Loved the use of language to create the sense of a historical tale passed on by word of mouth. The hot sex was a terrific bonus. Bravo!
1/7/22, 11:28 PM
Good story but at the start "He gently pulls the foreskin back on my cock" and later "my cock, which had been circumcised before" - continuity errors. ;)

1/7/22, 11:52 PM
@Mannah you're right. I wish I could say it was some sort of subtle change that he hadn't noticed, but it was all my mistake. I'll have to fix that :)