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1/8/22, 8:34 PM
Interesting beggining, but very hot premise (the Normal/sub societal dynamic). Also… not to be a party pooper, but I have some issues with "clean" being used in a casual way to refer to not having an STI. I'm okay with it in a degrading/humiliating setting, but I don't think this was the case. Used casually, I think it just reinforces serophobia. Anyway, it's just my humble one cent in that subject :)

1/8/22, 9:17 PM
@topdog Thank you for your comment and for pointing that out about the stigma and issues surrounding serophobia. It didn't cross my mind, but I can absolutely see it now, I agree 100% as it being an offensive off-hand comment. I have edited it now to remove that line. Thanks again, I appreciate this; it's always good to educate more about these things. :)
Jan 7, 2022
1/8/22, 8:53 PM
@Hypnothrill you say that you only write nefarious stories. But there is a way around that regarding Tabula Rasa. While I said the organization has only the best intentions, that doesn't mean that the simulation is as well. Think of it this way, the business is designed to make its clients happy and content. If will satisfy you innermost desires. So you can create simulations that cater to the specific desires of each men. What if a client wants a really pervy, mind fuck of a scenario. Maybe you can have twist built upon twists that make it hard for the client (and the reader) to know exactly what's going on. A client can experience a truly sinister simulation, and upon disconnecting from it, has no idea what he just went through. You emerge as a blank slate, feeling a full euphoria and ultimately fulfilled. It's as if waking from the best dream, but not really knowing why you feel so great. As far as Tabula Rasa goes, their main goal is to make money. To make money, they need clients. And to get clients, they have created a niche market, with virtually no competitors. So it's quite easy for them. Satisfy the client by giving them exactly what they want (which is happiness), and the money will flow.
Jan 7, 2022
1/8/22, 5:08 PM
TexMuscle ... those are all good questions. And unfortunately, it's hard to answer them within the story. If I try to, the story gets bogged down with exposition. And that will grind the narrative to a halt. I wanted to imply that there's really nothing sinister about this organization. It's simply a business that improves a man's living. It's probably a very expensive business to frequent, but if it makes you happy and betters your life, how much money would you pay? As for the decontamination suits. I tried to imagine that each individual is lacking specific nutrients, vitamins or chemicals in their bodies. Some men may require a higher testosterone level, while others don't. So as you enter your specific induction chamber, each man is flooded with a chemically and nutrient rich solution that is catered to their specific needs. If the technicians were exposed to these solutions, as it wasn't designed for them, it could be harmful to their bodies. Hope that makes sense. Tabula Rasa is also a gym in a way. We don't haven't seen what's outside the locker room. And I do invite writers to explore this if they want to write a chapter. (I'm looking at you Hypnothrill) There really could be a normal gym. I go to a gym, and it offers many services. They have massage chairs, tanning booths, and other amenities that you have to pay extra for. I see Tabula Rasa as a male improvement center. And perhaps the Induction Chambers are just services that you have to pay a higher fee for. In Cody's case, this was his second visit. And the first few times, the client's mind resists. It's just the subconscious mind resisting. It's not nefarious. I kinda borrowed this from "Inception" in which the mind seems to sense an intruder and defends itself almost like an immune system. You just have to find ways to trick the unconscious mind. And that's what was happening here.

1/8/22, 6:15 PM
@rubbrsome I only write nefarious stories LOL! Sorry you're not continuing this, but I hope it's just the first of many new stories from you in the new year.
Jan 7, 2022
1/8/22, 3:07 PM
Welcome back. Thanks for the new story. So many questions come to mind. Why the need for the decontamination suits? The process alters the men's minds does it alter their bodies as well? They go to gym expecting results in muscle development. It sounds like they are being trained for a greater purpose. Looking forward to the next installment.
Jan 7, 2022
1/8/22, 3:05 PM
Thanks for all the positive feedback regarding this story, and welcoming me back. Ooof ... maybe I shouldn't have been so quick to publish this story. It probably could've used another round of editing. My goal was to make this story jarring to the reader when it transitioned from the simulation to the technician's perspective. And unlike my other stories, there's no world domination plot or sinister motives. This is simply a business in which that is designed to better men's bodies and minds. It would be a business that I would gladly and willingly frequent. Unfortunately, it's not a story that I have further chapters to explore. However, if other writers want to have a crack at it, I say go for it. Maybe there's other methods in which Tabula Rasa offer there services. Maybe there's a "home delivery" option because of the pandemic. Maybe there's a group discount when there's large events or parties. Maybe they have to think outside the box when a particular client is having trouble in their induction. If anyone wants to add a chapter, you're more than welcome. I just ask that you keep the true intentions of Tabula Rasa pure and noble. It was designed to promote the betterment of mankind. I've written plenty of sinister organization; I'd like to keep one virtuous.
7/15/21, 4:34 AM
If this is a first attempt at a story, I'm astounded. I hope you have many more "attempts" in mind, because I already wish I could be part of this family.

7/15/21, 7:15 PM
What Deej said!!! ^^^

7/15/21, 7:56 PM
I am absolutely humbled @Deej when I see comments like this. Thank you so much!

1/8/22, 2:40 PM
I agree whole heartedly with @Deej
Jan 7, 2022
1/8/22, 10:03 AM
welcome back. missed your great tales of technology, rubber and control.
Dec 20, 2021
1/8/22, 9:34 AM
Hot, super clever, big musky boys go brrrr
1/8/22, 9:30 AM
very hot! i love the concept of magic users that are used to being in control having it used against them.
Martin
1/8/22, 8:56 AM
I can only agree with anonusr, I really enjoyed this chapter. This scenario is very much in line with my favorite personal fantasies. Please write more about this!