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2/15/24, 7:26 AM
I was following this along. I wanted so much at certain places for some enhancements, but it was well written. Chapter two might add the depth I am wanting... and hope you see a plot developing some day... I can, I can see the sub exercising mind control tapes on the Alpha to shape Him into a better Alpha with a a slower build to a progression into Alpha/sub with the Alpha not having the girlfriend available for a month while she was out of the country and him coming home drunk too many nights in a row. More from there over the months with Dan no longer paying rent or bills but daily and twice daily oral when that sneaks in. Buddy service would be the final chapter to me.
2/15/24, 6:42 AM
really good build up and development. Equally strong capture of the audience and hold making you want to read more. Not at all slow in fact could have been longer once they got back to the cabin (greedy ready lol) with what happened the next morning. Jackson Stock is a valid hypnotist with actual skill, so it is good to "hear" it come across in his written work. He does other niche specific headings so I'd love to read those headline stories. Alpha Findom, Dom/sissy, role reversal, Alpha brothers and a family sissy brother. Am I greedy to ask for ideas because he can do it? No, I don't think so, because he is skilled when very few are.....
2/15/24, 6:11 AM
That was very fun, is this part 1?
2/15/24, 6:01 AM
What happened to the father? Love to see other contributors offer additional chapters to see where those authors take it. Thos chapters don't need to necessarily be at the end! Imagine a mid-story chapter of elaboration that expands this story with new depth...
2/15/24, 12:16 AM
Thanks for sharing this series. Really enjoyed it. I was expecting the AI to upload into the Bodybuilder. Thought that the next time he has sex the AI gets addicted to the euphoric feelings of his first orgasim. The corruption starts all over with the rubber nano cum delivered by a horny AI rubber bodybuilder.

2/15/24, 2:33 AM
@[TexMuscle](/user/show/10002223) Back by popular demand, I’m working on an epilogue. Someone gets addicted to the feeling of _something_, and there will definitely be some corruption, but I’m not telling yet. Give me a little more time to work out the details. I’m not going to rush this one like I did the other chapters. Gratefully yours, -The Author

Martin
2/15/24, 5:46 AM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) Great news! :)
Sep 21, 2023
2/15/24, 5:38 AM
Excellent concept!
2/15/24, 3:45 AM
What happened to chapter 2? I read it earlier, but now it seems to be gone.

2/15/24, 4:23 AM
@[gregz](/user/show/605962) It is in the approval process again. I made a small change. Will be back soon.
2/15/24, 2:41 AM
Great story!Can I translate this story into Chinese, please? I wish more people could read this story!:smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

2/15/24, 2:43 AM
@[CJK_EAST](/user/show/10021710) That’s alright by me! Very cool!!

2/15/24, 4:07 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) cool!