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7/12/22, 4:18 AM
Loving this
D1344
7/12/22, 3:29 AM
Loved the story. Honestly goals.
7/12/22, 3:14 AM
So hoping Larry gets some boy to play with. Hope to read how well Mr Pryer is living off Zachary's NFL $ 👿
Anonymous
7/12/22, 3:05 AM
Always a BIG FAN! You always have had the ability to PULL ME IN your stories as if I'm a fly in wall just watching all your characters do what you've written them to do. This one was no exception. I can't wait for the next chapter!
7/10/22, 8:59 PM
Wow! Thanks so much for this wildly sexy story. I now have a new hot variation on one of my favorite fantasies -- being taken, mind-controlled, and happily used as the omega member of a gay family. This is going to be one of my favorite bed-time stories! I been trying to learn to have clear lucid dreams. This will give me extra motivation. For me a good story paints very vivid moving images in my mind (much like I am hoping to do with lucid dreaming). Your writing created this kind of image for me. I love all your characters. I suppose since I am already a gay submissive up for gay polyamory, I was fine with Darius and Xavier doing a major shift in Marcus's sexuality. It certainly was one way to allow him to again feel very close to his lifelong friends. In any case, Marcus seems at least as happy as he was previously. As a submissive bottom I feel a strong need to support and do what I can to protect my Dom Tops. Like Gay Chaste and borednhorny, I loved the shopping and the sex scenes. The pace of Marcus's transformation seemed perfect, and oh so hot! I disagree with phillipsm's perspective on Marcus's becoming simply a sex toy. He is becoming part of the threesome. Granted he is the submissive bottom (not at all a bad thing in my view), but the sex is better than he has ever experienced, and he is moving in with his best friends. I am hoping you continue with this story. Of course, in this case as the writer, in a sense you are the one in control and the dominant. As a devoted reader, I will be happy with whatever you do. Thanks again!

Anonymous
7/10/22, 9:24 PM
@boi98229 Yes, but they continuously say that now he will do anything they want him to do and they suggest he moves in so they will be able to use him more. During the sex scenes he mentions being only a conduit between the two - meaning he doesn't have a real place. It doesn't seem like they care about his feelings (plus they dictate his feelings for him) which supports pilipsm's theory and also a bit out of character for those who are supposed to be his best friends since childhood.

7/11/22, 6:17 AM
@Anonymous I don't disagree with your assessment of the situation. Objectively and morally you are right. I often argue with myself over how to judge morality in the realm of fantasy. I suppose l am often willing to ignore morally questionable behavior on that basis and just enjoy the story in spite of it, which is part of my reaction to this story. In addition though, here my point of view is personal to me in that I am already gay and submissive, so the plot fits well with my own fantasies. I generally don't even like 'straight to gay' themes, in part because it's a little annoying that apparently so many gay guys would rather pick up a straight guy and use him than hook up with another gay guy. I often block stories that are tagged that way. Unfortunately such a large number of otherwise good stories seem to be tagged with that theme, so my other option is to ignore that aspect of a story. I would have preferred in this story if there had been some other source of potential conflict, such as a shy gay guy who is very reluctant to get involved with his friends who have both become rough bdsm tops.

7/12/22, 2:35 AM
@boi98229 thanks for great comments and glad my stories can motivate you! I'm a little taken back but happy with the conflicts of opinions in the comments regarding whether Xavier and Darius are good or bad guys. All I'll say is that the next chapter explores their own, complex feelings about Marcus and what they've done to him, so I'll be interested to see if people's opinions change afterwards.
7/11/22, 10:32 PM
Another classic Elan Musk story. I like how we don't get any logical explanation for how this desire for intergenerational sex is spreading; it's almost like they're giving in to the inevitable.

7/12/22, 2:22 AM
@Hypnothrill Lust as a tidal force. Inexplicable, undeniable, bringing together family members all built like rugby props and hung like horses. Best way to break out of a year long writer's block is to bust out some old standards. :stuck_out_tongue:
7/9/22, 8:58 PM
Loved everything about this chapter. It was so sexy. I'm happy Marcus is moving in. He is such a good boy. Good story as is BTW. Very fun and sexy.

7/12/22, 2:18 AM
The @Heru Kane seal of approval 👌
7/12/22, 1:09 AM
I like where this is going. I know they will be transforming more men into beasts. I love it.

7/12/22, 1:14 AM
@Tgay I'm glad to hear it. I have written most of the miniseries in a rough draft and I just need to edit the rest of them.
Anonymous
7/12/22, 12:21 AM
Can't wait for more
Anonymous
7/12/22, 12:02 AM
I didn't used to be able to enjoy this kind of thing, but it's just pretend and the horror aspect is really hot. I'd read more.