Recent Comments

1/29/23, 11:13 PM
Good start! I’m intrigued to see where it’s headed. If you need more help with the next chapter, don’t be afraid to join the discord!!

1/30/23, 6:46 PM
@[Grant Spiral](/user/show/57142) already a part of the discord and look at the activity for so long finally gave me the confidence to just sit down and write and do it and then just post it!
Martin
1/30/23, 5:59 PM
Why is no one commenting on this story? It's a hot story, getting into the mind of a man who's slowly turned into an obedient and willing slave...
1/30/23, 5:07 PM
wow will dream about being Steve tonight Great Story SIr
Nutiper
1/30/23, 4:37 PM
Oh oh... I should have seen it coming... Never trust a blue-eyed himbo... Even knowing the damn genre of the story, it _still_ threw me for a loop! Lots of mournful saxophone music vibes there... The only thing that will fill this hardboiled hole in my heart (other than a stiff drink at a seedy bar—or a stiff cock) is even more tales of Cary Carrington as he navigates the politics of Himbotown...!!
1/30/23, 2:01 PM
This is such an interesting story premise, but i worry about Sean. He's a little vindictive to Justin, and he's supposed to be one of the ones on the "nice" list. Sure they can't let Justin get away with bratting around until he gets his way, but there are ways to do that which don't involve reaching for meanness. Overwhelming love and ridiculous patience with a side of deliberate misunderstanding work too. if Justin's daddies operate solely within the rules that this is an ABDL relationship and that justin is the little and they are the daddies then it shows Justin his boundaries for good behavior. he doesn't have to like the rules, but he will know without a doubt how to play the game.

1/30/23, 3:26 PM
@[Mind Labyrinth](/user/show/910312) The way I look at it is that Sean has some room for character growth. He’s obviously The defender of the family. Perhaps this isn’t just about Justin being punished, but Santa is also helping Sean become ready to be the best parent he can be for when they get an actual child.
1/30/23, 1:42 PM
A himbo hatchery! This feels like origin story for himbos. Lost history. Gay paleontology. :grin:
1/30/23, 1:27 PM
Glad to see this story continue man, keep up the good work!
1/30/23, 11:08 AM
First Guide could not track any collars and tokens he made. What a lucky guy he was.

1/30/23, 1:04 PM
@[Tofu83](/user/show/87624) The First Guide can track collars, if they're functioning. Anselm's isn't. Gate tokens can't be tracked because we don't want to make things too easy for him :grinning:
1/30/23, 11:10 AM
I'm starting to think we need a "ethics" rating categories for some stories (mine included). This is so hot, so exciting, but also so wrong !! :sweat_smile: I love this story, it is making me hard. (Seriously : I'm half joking half serious with this. I know this is fiction and all, but an ethic rating on stories might be a way to 1. partly describe the story 2. be used as trigger warning for people who might need it.)

1/30/23, 11:30 AM
@[Nephilim](/user/show/941196) Hi Nephilim! First off, I'd like to thank you for your honest feedback. I have a kind of blanket trigger warning in my bio since almost all of my stories are, well, problematic XD I'm writing about what turns me on personally and although i think we all know it's a fantasy, you're probably right that I should do more to warn people who find this kind of thing unethical. I'll take that onboard.

1/30/23, 12:50 PM
@[PuffDeamon](/user/show/10025400) Try not to take criticisms of your character's actions onto yourself. I am one of the people who complained about Marcus, but it was about him. It's a good story. The character is well-written. But he's a well-written sociopath and that provokes a reaction. It's not a criticism of the author, or even the story itself to have a reaction to a character like that. But yeah, a character who casually betrays, effortlessly lies through his teeth, sadistically strangles someone while watching them like a kid with a magnifying glass and some ants, and ruthlessly controls his "friend" all without ever having the slightest emotion is going to provoke strong feelings in your readers. You have to expect that. If you don't want to have a certain segment of readers who have shocked or upset reactions then you probably do need to put a warning in front of your stories. Personally, I don't think a warning is necessary - but you're also gonna get some reactions.
Elm
1/30/23, 12:42 PM
This story keeps getting better and better!