Recent Comments

4/1/24, 6:52 PM
Great work. Loving this series.
Anonymous
3/31/24, 7:48 AM
Hot,evil stuff.. Bit of my twisted mind wanted you to bulk up and beef out Yusuf and his devoted Arabic family into big dicked muscle alphas. Not much a fan of fat or dick shrink,unless it's the poor victim,like Ed,and even then,not much of the fat. Yes,i said i had some perverted fantasies..

Anonymous
4/1/24, 6:37 PM
@Anonymous I did not read the story through. Indeed there was some muscle growth in it. Hoping theres more,and Fred comes around to Yusuf's thinking
4/1/24, 6:35 PM
Thanks for continuing. This is the best chapter so far). I hope Fred will retain his consciousness and Yusuf will feel his own invention) I hope one of the characters will be able to do this and retribution in any form will not come, but still it would have overtaken Yusuf. By the way, if the glove is destroyed and Yusuf’s memory of everything that happened and what he invented is erased. Then the whole family (with the exception of Eddie will remain) sexy gay Arabs)
4/1/24, 6:28 PM
I can only agree with the rest of commenters: This is very well written and such a delight to read. It could easily be the beginning of a book borrowed from the library. I like how every detail transported us to the place, period, and people that comprise this story. We get to know who these men are, what are their aspirations in life, and what moved them to leave everything behind for a fortnight and a promise. I also like the little erotic nudges here and there, evoking the burning yet natural internal desires characteristic of the men who live in a moment in time were intercourse was not as accessible or common. All in all, great job!
3/31/24, 6:36 PM
It was fantastic

Pcm
4/1/24, 4:47 PM
@[Azzellover](/user/show/914474) Thank you!
3/31/24, 4:01 PM
Wonderful first story! Love the corruption and family stories!

Pcm
4/1/24, 4:46 PM
@[Gay_Genes](/user/show/298626) Both themes have always been my kinks. I'm really glad that you enjoy the story!
Anonymous
3/31/24, 1:14 PM
I love this story, it really pushed my buttons!

Pcm
4/1/24, 4:46 PM
@Anonymous Thank you very much!
3/31/24, 12:09 PM
Welcome to the site! I'm confident you'll find an audience. People love corruption stories.

Pcm
4/1/24, 4:44 PM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) Thank you so much! I have been following your stories for a long time now, I'm really glad for your comment!
Ab3
3/31/24, 10:58 AM
It's damn hot story... Please continue where william and his Father spread this pleasure to whole world... Peoples resisting in start and falling for it and asking for more

Pcm
4/1/24, 4:42 PM
@[Ab3](/user/show/10036556) I'm really glad that you like the story! And of course, our horny demons will not rest until every man in the King become as depraved and horny manly demons like they are. Currently, I'm planning four more stories for this series based around kinky fantasy scenarios; being taking place during a feast, a tournament, a war, and one big finale. I hope that you will find the rest of the story as enjoyable.
3/30/24, 10:27 AM
Hey dude, this is a nice story, but the amount of basic spelling and grammar mistakes that popped up on the first page.. kinda showed that while you might be passionate about this, there's a lack of attention to detail. That makes the story feel like a rushed out the door, never looked at again draft rather than a sexy work of erotic fiction. And when authors don't do basic checks, it lessens the impact of the writing, takes away the passion and main point of the writing. None of this is meant to be discouraging: run this through a spell checker just once and there's a bunch of small, easily corrected mistakes. Incredibly useful tools are available to all authors, especially if English is not the authors native language. > masterbaiting while smelling his underwear masturbating > feeling ashaed ashamed > stoping his feet on the ground in anger. stomping > Moreover, if that wasn’t enough embarrassing, embarrassing enough > Not only you like to smell Not only do you

Hey
4/1/24, 3:37 PM
Thank you, I have revised a lot of the mistakes, and i have made some minor changes for better experience. They will be available within 48 hrs after my edit is allowed to proceed. Please read once more and share any other ideas i can use for my future work. @[Nipstug](/user/show/10023878)
Hey
4/1/24, 3:36 PM
Hello, Author here.Thank you for reading this and please excuse some of my mistake as I’m still new to writing and English isn’t my first language. (I have revised a lot of them, if you find anymore please leave a comment) Im hoping to continue this with 2 or more stories (one about divulging into the past when they first met). Please suggest some kinks/fetishes that you would like them to do. That’s it, peace out
4/1/24, 12:58 AM
When they arrived at the entrance of town, Clay was safe from the zombies. Was he separated from the group and that's how he became infected? The story jumped quickly to him being attacked.

4/1/24, 2:54 AM
@[muscle growth man](/user/show/10040653) Oh yeah I fear that I rushed the story in that part a lot, the way I imagined it’s that he got left behind because he was way more tired and he wasn’t as athletic. Definitely should’ve mentioned it there

4/1/24, 2:49 PM
@[ArielZagreus](/user/show/10040716) That makes sense that Clay wasn't as athletic and fell victim to the muscle zombies. Thanks for the clarification. Anxious to know what happens to the other guys in future chapters.
Cb2
4/1/24, 2:36 PM
This is terrific, the creeping dread about whats going to happen is amazing.
4/1/24, 2:14 PM
Very nice
4/1/24, 1:45 PM
Your stories are always mixed with sadness and lust.
4/1/24, 1:20 PM
Sad to see such a good storie being dropped
Anonymous
4/1/24, 1:01 PM
I’ll never feel safe in a foam bath again. Or will I?
Anonymous
4/1/24, 6:48 AM
Intense. I'm curious to see what happens next.

4/1/24, 12:15 PM
@Anonymous thank you
4/1/24, 11:42 AM
Even after months of waiting, the writer of this story is not back yet... I really love "butler transformation" erotic stories with male age progression, but erotica in this subjects are surprisingly uncommon. So it's all the more unfortunate for me that this story isn't going on... I wish there were more stories based on these old ap butler kinks.
4/1/24, 11:37 AM
Thank you so much for the story that's getting hotter and hotter. As a lover of this kind of race change erotica, it's always great to see such a great new story. I'm really curious and excited to see where the ending of this story will go.
4/1/24, 2:24 AM
Wow! I LOVE this so much! It's getting even HOTTER! Fantastic writing!! Thank you and I hope that you continue.

4/1/24, 4:38 AM
@[letithappen](/user/show/1148950) Thank you! Excited to get into more trouble with these two!
4/1/24, 2:46 AM
best intimacy of the story! WOW - i love these men.
Anonymous
3/31/24, 6:06 PM
I love how Mike is slowly becoming a whore and still dominates his friends :yum:

4/1/24, 2:25 AM
@Anonymous Mike is a great captain both on the field and in bed. But her fat ass make it inevitable to want to eat those buns :tongue: :peach:
3/31/24, 12:58 PM
Soooo hot can't wait till he realizes what's happening

4/1/24, 1:19 AM
@[DannyStorm](/user/show/10002076) The question will be, will he be worried or excited when he realizes? ;)

4/1/24, 1:35 AM
@[Ziel](/user/show/1683554) Depends on if he's gonna beef up like the other boys and has plenty of boys to top him
Pjotru
4/1/24, 1:23 AM
I wanna say - this is extremly hot and it pushes all my kinks. Clicks perfectly. I like how controlling is Andrew, how Al want it more and how Cam is loving it, to be their toy. Can't wait to see how dynamics in this trio will develop... :D
3/31/24, 1:09 PM
Please continue this!

4/1/24, 1:19 AM
@[Silas](/user/show/274763) I hope to!
Anonymous
3/31/24, 1:58 PM
FINALLY! A story that appreciates SMALL COCKS! 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼

4/1/24, 1:18 AM
@Anonymous The unhung heroes
Anonymous
2/12/24, 9:02 AM
super hot!!! nothing better than a hot sexy jock with a 1" acorn between his legs. love the start and hope there's more. there are so few stories about hot studs with tiny dicks or even better, cock shrinking stories. :)

4/1/24, 1:18 AM
@Anonymous Yeah. I'm a fan of dicks of all shapes and sizes, and I enjoy the chance to sing the praises of the little guys.
2/11/24, 3:57 AM
Small dick appreciation!

4/1/24, 1:17 AM
@[astrologus](/user/show/1037572) Small cocks rock!
2/10/24, 8:34 PM
Look forward to reading more :)

4/1/24, 1:17 AM
@[Silas](/user/show/274763) Glad to hear you're enjoying it! :D