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2/28/26, 5:51 PM
Thanks enjoyed this and your other works.
Anonymous
2/28/26, 3:57 PM
I agree with everyone else. Great start and I can't wait to read more. Thanks for posting this!
2/28/26, 3:54 PM
Truly amazing
Anonymous
2/28/26, 3:46 PM
Really thrilled to see another series from you! This was a great chapter and I'm very excited for the next part.
DD
2/28/26, 3:24 PM
Two tops in the bedroom... hmm this is going to go well lol. I love this, great start, looking forward to seeing more.
2/28/26, 1:28 PM
Don't change it for me. I'm pretty much full of shit. Just push ahead. I just thought that YOUR head might have not been in that chapter. Thanks for taking the time to write.

2/28/26, 1:57 PM
@[Body Odor](/user/show/962263) Well, you should know by now that the Queers think shit is a normal fact of life and nothing to be shied away from. :wink: I’m new to writing and just a bit surprised that you saw through me. Chapter 5 _does_ read as rushed, as I read back through it. At this point Bob/Meatsack _is_ an ancillary character. I did not give him much thought, so I did not write much. But he deserves better than to be treated as disposable. We are all the main characters in our own story, after all. I did not step inside his (somewhat empty, if I’m to be honest) head, but I really should try. Who knows what we’ll find inside there? The next chapter is already in the publication pipeline and the one after that is fully-written in my head and 3/4 of the way typed out. So I have some time to spare.
2/28/26, 1:24 PM
I have rarely anticipated new chapters to a story like the one you're building here. It is so damn good.
2/28/26, 9:33 AM
OK, truth be told, Chapter 5 left me preparing to abandon the whole enterprise. The pace was frenetic and your like for quick transformations was in hyper drive. But as Bill said: " I’m not going to pretend it doesn’t turn me on.” Yet, something seemed off in your writing. I was getting stressed out because you seemed to have turned against your characters. I went back to Chapter 5 and reread it and still felt something was misfiring. Then, came Chapter 6 which came like the transformation it was meant to be. The pace was, slow and romantic. The characters were humanized even while living a fantasy. The mood was mellow. You got me to love Bill's easy charm. With the expanded length, you even made Stench more interesting human. Chapter 5 and 6 are clearly the work of the same person, but Chapter 5 seemed to be written out of duty. Chapter 6 taps into something personal and as a result it put the story back on track, at least for me. Chapter 6 reads like a complete story in and of itself, and is a solid piece of composition in any genre. It's too late to change the narrative of speedy transformations for this story, but I'm convinced that you can achieve a great story keeping things on the plane of reality, not magic. Keep it up. You're a wild ass of a talent that expect to produce some classic queer tales.

2/28/26, 12:42 PM
@[Body Odor](/user/show/962263) Thanks for taking the time to write out what you were thinking. I will put some thought into how best to rewrite Chapter 5 and slow it down, get into the characters’ heads. Looking at it now, yeah, I can see how it felt rushed. Thanks again!
2/27/26, 10:06 PM
Your story fullfill my deepest desire to have a pussy instead of my useless microdick. Although I know it will always be just a dream, this wonderful, positive love story allowed me to believe in it for a while, and for that, I am grateful. I hope to have the chance to read more of your stories!

2/28/26, 10:12 AM
@[LowDesertDad](/user/show/10069349) So glad you enjoyed it. I've got a number of stories on here, none of them exactly the same... mainly because I've tried to nail the fantasy in one go and not feel like I need to keep returning to it. But there are definitely ones about being a big muscle bottom with a tiny dick and loving it., and there are ones about being a fit muscle bro and being transferred into a woman's body with a real life pussy... I think you might enjoy those too.
Willie Cici
2/28/26, 3:32 AM
Loved the first chapter. Can't wait for the next.