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1/18/26, 3:48 PM
You've captured the wonderful scenes I once imagined in words, and I'm so envious of your writing skills.

1/18/26, 4:51 PM
@[Ozzy](/user/show/10048159) Thank you! Although, I think I promised some developments regarding Yellow/Gold in this chapter,... but they've slid into the next chapter. This time for sure! ;)
1/18/26, 3:14 PM
WOW! This was fantastically engaging. I love the hypnotic elements. I am really enjoying this storytelling and your writing style. I hope he gets a lot of erotic pleasure from the aroma of men in the gym. That would be so nice for me!
1/18/26, 5:05 AM
Have you considered publishing this and duty boy? Cuz like this series is such genuinely good on top of being twistedly sexy. Like some of these mental sequences give me Evangelion vibes.

1/18/26, 2:54 PM
@[Chris Pyre](/user/show/69911) When Henry's giant head rises out of a blood-red lake to form a cinematic backdrop,... you'll know I've gone too far! XD Thank you! I'm really glad to hear such praise :D
1/18/26, 10:53 AM
So hot!! Hope you feel inspired for chapter 2 soon!
1/18/26, 8:34 AM
This’s so hot! I’m starting to think Cliff might actually want to go along with the transformation willingly.
1/18/26, 7:20 AM
I enjoyed the story and the description of the process of transforming and training Chris and Mark. However, I did have a bit of a problem with all the emphasis on how straight the boys were. I thought the speed of their transformations would have been more believable if there had been more emphasis on how willing the boys were to sell their sexual services to make money. If their only motivation for making money was their need to pay the rent, they could have moved to somewhere cheaper rather than resorting to male prostitution. If they had been made out to be less perfectly straight, less desperate to pay their rent, and more flexible and curious in their sexual practices, the transformation would in my mind have been more believable. On top of that Mark was made out to be not only straight but also this inflexible Alpha, yet he seemed to take to the training as easily as Chris who was supposed to be more naturally submissive.
Feb 16, 2022
Anonymous
1/18/26, 6:52 AM
more please!!!
1/18/26, 5:14 AM
It took me a very long while to find out about this story (I don't login here that often) but I just wanted to say that I'm flattered my story inspired you to write this.
1/18/26, 4:29 AM
I hope there is a part 3.
11/3/25, 12:09 AM
Could we get an epilogue of Tom going back to his old gym? His former friends seeing his total destruction?? This was AWESOME ❤️

1/18/26, 4:24 AM
@[Horndog Piggy](/user/show/10016042) Glad you enjoyed it! I probably won't be expanding out the story further. My brain reaches a point where I start running out of ideas for a particular dynamic or narrative. :sweat_smile: However, if anyone ever wants to write a one-off or extensions / re-imaginings of my stuff totally fine with it. I have some other separate stories I've written lately but haven't posted them because the tags got jacked up on a couple of the chapters.