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DD
2/28/26, 3:24 PM
Two tops in the bedroom... hmm this is going to go well lol. I love this, great start, looking forward to seeing more.
2/28/26, 1:28 PM
Don't change it for me. I'm pretty much full of shit. Just push ahead. I just thought that YOUR head might have not been in that chapter. Thanks for taking the time to write.

2/28/26, 1:57 PM
@[Body Odor](/user/show/962263) Well, you should know by now that the Queers think shit is a normal fact of life and nothing to be shied away from. :wink: I’m new to writing and just a bit surprised that you saw through me. Chapter 5 _does_ read as rushed, as I read back through it. At this point Bob/Meatsack _is_ an ancillary character. I did not give him much thought, so I did not write much. But he deserves better than to be treated as disposable. We are all the main characters in our own story, after all. I did not step inside his (somewhat empty, if I’m to be honest) head, but I really should try. Who knows what we’ll find inside there? The next chapter is already in the publication pipeline and the one after that is fully-written in my head and 3/4 of the way typed out. So I have some time to spare.
2/28/26, 1:24 PM
I have rarely anticipated new chapters to a story like the one you're building here. It is so damn good.
2/28/26, 9:33 AM
OK, truth be told, Chapter 5 left me preparing to abandon the whole enterprise. The pace was frenetic and your like for quick transformations was in hyper drive. But as Bill said: " I’m not going to pretend it doesn’t turn me on.” Yet, something seemed off in your writing. I was getting stressed out because you seemed to have turned against your characters. I went back to Chapter 5 and reread it and still felt something was misfiring. Then, came Chapter 6 which came like the transformation it was meant to be. The pace was, slow and romantic. The characters were humanized even while living a fantasy. The mood was mellow. You got me to love Bill's easy charm. With the expanded length, you even made Stench more interesting human. Chapter 5 and 6 are clearly the work of the same person, but Chapter 5 seemed to be written out of duty. Chapter 6 taps into something personal and as a result it put the story back on track, at least for me. Chapter 6 reads like a complete story in and of itself, and is a solid piece of composition in any genre. It's too late to change the narrative of speedy transformations for this story, but I'm convinced that you can achieve a great story keeping things on the plane of reality, not magic. Keep it up. You're a wild ass of a talent that expect to produce some classic queer tales.

2/28/26, 12:42 PM
@[Body Odor](/user/show/962263) Thanks for taking the time to write out what you were thinking. I will put some thought into how best to rewrite Chapter 5 and slow it down, get into the characters’ heads. Looking at it now, yeah, I can see how it felt rushed. Thanks again!
2/27/26, 10:06 PM
Your story fullfill my deepest desire to have a pussy instead of my useless microdick. Although I know it will always be just a dream, this wonderful, positive love story allowed me to believe in it for a while, and for that, I am grateful. I hope to have the chance to read more of your stories!

2/28/26, 10:12 AM
@[LowDesertDad](/user/show/10069349) So glad you enjoyed it. I've got a number of stories on here, none of them exactly the same... mainly because I've tried to nail the fantasy in one go and not feel like I need to keep returning to it. But there are definitely ones about being a big muscle bottom with a tiny dick and loving it., and there are ones about being a fit muscle bro and being transferred into a woman's body with a real life pussy... I think you might enjoy those too.
Willie Cici
2/28/26, 3:32 AM
Loved the first chapter. Can't wait for the next.
2/26/26, 4:30 PM
I love the slow transformation, how he fights yet is accepting of his role. How horny and correct it’s making him feel. Would be amazing if he learnt how to chauffeur

Anonymous
2/28/26, 3:30 AM
@[ArcherUK](/user/show/2248631) Agreed - especially with the right hat! (or maybe full traditional uniform)
2/28/26, 2:41 AM
Applying gender stereotypes to bedroom roles is so hot, and this is a really well-written setup to boot. STOKED to see where this goes.
2/28/26, 12:23 AM
Just marking me checking in to see if theres a new chapter! I'm so excited for the next one!
2/27/26, 9:47 PM
Can't wait for more