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cutlerfan
12/3/16, 6:23 AM
Interesting story. Don't let the comments on grammar and spacing keep you from continuing your writing. You told the story very well so don't let any criticism, even constructive suggestions, prevent you from writing. Your quality is good and that is what matters. Good Luck!
Anonymous
12/3/16, 5:49 AM
I liked the story until you made Ryan the master.
Slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
12/3/16, 5:40 AM
Love being Daddy's little boy. Never thought of building a custom Daddy of my own!
Anonymous
12/3/16, 5:38 AM
Interesting premise. Good writing!!
xORRiNx
12/3/16, 5:24 AM
Part 2 is coming along nicely. It's 40% complete. I think you'll all like it! Although... spoiler... he won't become gay. I'm sorry!
Anonymous
12/3/16, 5:07 AM
great way of telling a story...love it...good work :-)
Anonymous
12/3/16, 5:06 AM
I agree wow
Anonymous
12/2/16, 11:55 PM
I love it would love an follow up having them bound somehow ... pass the first night of passion. With some transformation
Anonymous
12/2/16, 10:54 PM
A pretty hot story, but in the future please break your stories into paragraphs. It is difficult to read a story that is just one paragraph.