Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/3/16, 4:19 PM
Welcome to our club Mr viking excellent work Love when family Is involved makes what happens that much more special Can't wait for more from you
Anonymous
12/3/16, 1:50 PM
This is one of the hottest stories I've ever read! I can't wait to see what you write next.
Anonymous
12/3/16, 12:17 PM
yeah,I hate the reversal. The nerd should win. Neds Rule!
Anonymous
12/3/16, 11:41 AM
Very hot. I like the spontaneous, drastic growth in this story.
cutlerfan
12/3/16, 6:23 AM
Interesting story. Don't let the comments on grammar and spacing keep you from continuing your writing. You told the story very well so don't let any criticism, even constructive suggestions, prevent you from writing. Your quality is good and that is what matters. Good Luck!
Anonymous
12/3/16, 5:49 AM
I liked the story until you made Ryan the master.
Slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
12/3/16, 5:40 AM
Love being Daddy's little boy. Never thought of building a custom Daddy of my own!
Anonymous
12/3/16, 5:38 AM
Interesting premise. Good writing!!
xORRiNx
12/3/16, 5:24 AM
Part 2 is coming along nicely. It's 40% complete. I think you'll all like it! Although... spoiler... he won't become gay. I'm sorry!
Anonymous
12/3/16, 5:07 AM
great way of telling a story...love it...good work :-)