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10/10/24, 1:44 AM
Time will tell. No fair wanting all the goodies all at once. ;-)
10/10/24, 12:36 AM
super spicy!

10/10/24, 1:01 AM
@[bigdudeart](/user/show/10004703) Thanks
10/9/24, 8:50 PM
What a wonderful story.

10/9/24, 9:22 PM
@[J.J.](/user/show/1209668) Thank you! I'm hoping to have at least three parts as his conversion progresses

10/9/24, 11:12 PM
@[GoodBoy](/user/show/1900997) Can't wait! (maybe with black socks, though?)
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10/9/24, 9:42 PM
Is Frank going to become a werewolf or did something else happen?
10/9/24, 8:39 PM
After Lucas's "how dare you mistreat him like this" rant, I really really want to see him fall hard. But Bobby hasn't exactly been eliciting sympathy either so I'm not really invested in him getting back on top. Maybe the professor inherits Lucas, Bobby, the coach, the team.. an unexpected windfall!
Feb 18, 2024
10/9/24, 5:24 PM
I want that magical chastity cage ;)
10/9/24, 4:58 PM
I’d love this to have a sequel or another chapter
10/9/24, 4:38 PM
Liked it a lot. :green_heart:
10/6/24, 6:25 PM
Absolutely awesome story and beautifully written. Jay's transformation has been so uplifting and joyous to read about as he shaped himself up and conformed to the strict and rigid rules of the church and committed himself to living the Gospel and abandoning his old ways and lifestyle. I was so worried though, when he saw Brandon that all the hard work he had done and all the progress he had made, thanks to the other Elders, was going to become undone and he would lapse back into his old ways. I was overjoyed when those old, deeply embedded emotions suddenly dissolved and his true and new, pure, stronger self rose to the surface and battled his old self to the ground and I loved the line, "The words stung, cutting through the fog in Jay’s mind, but before he could respond, Elder Martel took over completely. The smile returned to his face as he stepped forward, the Book of Mormon already in his hand." At this point, I fist pumped the air and was so proud of him - and of YOU - for writing this superb ending. Thank you for probably the best story I have read on here and I hope from the other comments here, that you know how much so many of us have appreciated it.

10/7/24, 12:26 AM
@[BSuited](/user/show/10003178) I agree, I got a bit worried because I thought the ending would've just completely undone everything that had been built up so far, but I'm glad it didn't. I love a "bad ending" sort of story when it comes to hypno transformation, stuck in his new life completely changed. That and the thought of his ex also converting and then they become best friends instead, eventually happy seeing them marry a woman in church at each other's weddings.

10/7/24, 11:48 PM
@[SuitAndTieLover](/user/show/1478878) I'm a big fan of Twilight Zone, Goosebumps, Are You Afraid of the Dark, Tales from the Darkside and Tales from the Crypt and so forth and most the time is not a happy ending or if it is there is a dark twist there.

10/9/24, 3:43 AM
@[BSuited](/user/show/10003178) It was a much better ending than if he had "remembered and regressed" back to who he was before.

10/9/24, 4:16 PM
@[J.J.](/user/show/1209668) Yes, that is always the nightmare that even people who we think are fully conditioned and converted can often suddenly drift back to old ways if certain things trigger a re-connection with the past. Regression is a real danger and must be avoided at all costs. Surrounding yourself by good role models who will pro-actively and assertively call out any signs of sub standard behaviour or weaknesses in remembering older times and older ways is always vital here. Elder Martell discovered this and this meant his new standards of living were so deeply embedded and enforced that thankfully, they fought and won those old lingering feelings about Brandon and his old self was left in the past - where it belongs.
Helloitsme
10/9/24, 4:10 PM
Are you going to do a follow up with this?? Would love to see him and his farther suited serving the new master.