Recent Comments

8/31/18, 6:06 AM
I think this story has some merit so please carry on with it. it was a bit confusing (I take it that English is not your first language) but I carried on reading and like how it ended up. as Hypnothrill said it would be good to see the Biotomes turn on their captors and turn the whole base into the same creatures
ForgottenCradle
8/31/18, 4:15 AM
So glad to see it back and continuing. This chapter was great
Anonymous
8/31/18, 3:04 AM
More wishes, reality change is hot!
8/31/18, 3:03 AM
The story felt a little short, and I would have loved to have seen more descriptions of how Sgt. Reynolds felt as he was mind controlled and transformed. But it's a great premise. I'd love a sequel where the Biotomes turn on their military masters and begin converting them as well.
tfmrph33@yahoo.com
8/31/18, 2:49 AM
Chapter 2 please!
Anonymous
8/30/18, 11:42 PM
Keep going. It’s a great concept.
absman420
8/30/18, 9:51 PM
absman420 here! What a great story! I had no idea this was here. Thank you -- very flattering. You have caught the vibe of the original story beautifully. Well done.
Rubba
8/30/18, 8:53 PM
Barely understood a word of it towards the end which is a pity because it SEEMED hot...
8/30/18, 4:04 AM
Great story! Please continue!
8/30/18, 3:41 AM
Great story, the emotional, mental and physical. I love how the bear gave Scott a choice and Scott was so in awe he decided to become the bear's. And great line"...a full dose of my honey and you don't come back from that.: GrrWOOF!