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Down The Foxhole
6/13/18, 7:20 AM
So good. I only wished for more hypnosis but the obliviousness of it all just makes it so so so much better
Anonymous
6/13/18, 3:47 AM
This was great! I agree with the other comment; it would be awesome if you reworked more Ice Bear stories. My vote is for Work Wife.
Anonymous
6/13/18, 3:00 AM
I like it!
Anonymous
6/13/18, 2:55 AM
Hey guys, its me. Sorry about the formatting, I had indented each paragraph beforehand on Word, but I guess the indents were taken away when I pasted it into the site.
Fagneto
6/13/18, 2:42 AM
I think he meant the link to part two. It wasn't working earlier.
Svplgsmslm
6/13/18, 2:39 AM
Excellent. Great ENDing
Anonymous
6/13/18, 2:33 AM
Unreal remix. You should do versions for the rest of Ice Bears stories
Anonymous
6/13/18, 2:14 AM
So hot! Damn! I'm still hard!!!
6/13/18, 1:35 AM
Really like what you've done here, particularly like the changes to their fashion sense. Convincing them to dress themselves as sluts, even if it's just around the house, is always a hot change to see. The only other thing, it would help a bit of you put an extra line between paragraphs, just to help break up the text. But that's just formatting, the content was excellent. Great work!
6/13/18, 12:52 AM
I had to push myself through this story. Ventriloquist dummies and clowns are the same genre for me: very creepy in a creepy, not scary kind of way. That said, it must have been a hot story because I read it all. As stated, I did like the creativity in the hypnosis coming in a different, unexpected way. And that said, in any sequel it would be great to take a guy who sees these things as creepy. The transformation from being appalled at the puppet and eventually calling it Master, could be very hot!