Recent Comments

Martin
10/31/18, 6:19 AM
**Some tips for authoring:** - Always add an empty line between paragraphs. Otherwise you will get a large blob of text. Remember this, especially if you’re using Word or another word processor, because they work differently. - If you want to add links, disable(!) the Automatically generate clickable links option and use the Markdown syntax which is \[Link text](URL). This way you can specify the text that appears for the link, while the Automatically generate clickable links always uses “Click this” for the link. Separate parts of the story with a horizontal ruler. To create them, use put three dashes (---) between two paragraphs, but make sure that there's an empty line before and after it. - You can get a preview of your story in the Submit Story page by clicking the “eye”-icon in the editor toolbar. This is not 100% accurate but gives a good impression. Oh, and just for your info, I've just edited your story slightly to format better (using horizontal lines and better links). I hope you don't mind. But feel free to do more edits, if you want.
Oct 28, 2018
Anonymous
10/31/18, 4:59 AM
The 14 and 16 inch penises got my attention ! LoL I was too aroused to try to analyze the story after that. Where is the ranch located ?
Anonymous
10/31/18, 4:36 AM
I agree with Darmani, Bill deserves at least one win. I still love the story, and I'm waiting for the next chapter.
Anonymous
10/31/18, 4:06 AM
I agree that it's one HOT story !
10/31/18, 3:54 AM
Fixed it. Will take some time to get up. Didn't know what I had to do.
Anonymous
10/31/18, 3:51 AM
Holy shit, please separate into paragraphs its really hard to read.  This one sounds hot too, please fix D:
Anonymous
10/31/18, 3:14 AM
Every time you switch speakers, you need to start a new paragraph.
Anonymous
10/31/18, 3:13 AM
please continue
10/31/18, 2:31 AM
Excellent
UchihaDEMS
10/31/18, 2:24 AM
Despite the bad spelling, the story is so damn hot. I mean, geez, I LOVE IT. It has almost everything I like (except for feet). Hot dads turned into slaves for youngsters. Its so rare to see this kind of stories. Change his perception and think whatever you want or the fact to made them oblivious This one made me happy in so many levels ;) I do hope to see more. Like, what Jamie would do to his slave dad. We could also see some other kind point of view like each friend with his experiences. This story has so much potential. Keep it up!