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Anonymous
11/7/18, 9:52 PM
can't wait for the next part
11/7/18, 9:07 PM
Sooooo hot Keep on writing
11/7/18, 9:00 PM
I certainly enjoyed the changes in the story, though I will admit that it felt a bit all over the place at times, though I suppose that could've been the purpose since it did become a moshpit. :3 Regardless, a fun read!
11/7/18, 8:37 PM
Looks like a reporter is on the chopping block next, I am eager to see how this continues, and I'm also glad to see Jake finally succumb. :D
Anonymous
11/7/18, 8:27 PM
quite so. I'll adjust that
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
11/7/18, 8:14 PM
can you continue this story? please?
MagnusTheGreat
11/7/18, 8:11 PM
loved it
MagnusTheGreat
11/7/18, 8:07 PM
would love to watch a movie with this theme
MagnusTheGreat
11/7/18, 8:03 PM
I would some more stories with this world
11/7/18, 7:14 PM
Love it! Thanks for writing this sequel from the test subjects' perspective! Just one editing note, though: the 4th and 5th paragraphs (and a few of the final paragraphs) suddenly shift from 3rd person to 1st person narration.