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2/1/26, 1:15 PM
An excellent beginning; I agree that the conversion process could've been just a tad more in depth. Looking forward to subsequent chapters...
Anonymous
2/1/26, 3:02 AM
This one made me feel bad for Liam, didn’t think Noah would just let this happen when he seemed to care so much.

2/1/26, 1:04 PM
@Anonymous yeah man, i get it, we gotta see what happens next tho!
2/1/26, 12:18 AM
WOW! WHOA. WOW. the armpit was so good.

2/1/26, 1:04 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) always lmao
2/1/26, 4:18 AM
This was a hard read. Liam caring about Noah enough to bottom to distract him and then Noah just let's Connor have his way with him? I really hope Noah fixes this without Liam getting completely screwed over... I wasn't expecting the story to get so sad. It was definitely hard to read this one.

2/1/26, 1:04 PM
@[blindmandriving](/user/show/1989297) yeah fs, it was hard to write too but let’s see what happens next!
2/1/26, 11:29 AM
Excellent story, I'm eagerly awaiting the continuation if there is one. It would be great to delve into the subjugation of the world in more detail and show it from different perspectives, as well as introduce new characters who realize that people are being hypnotized (other scientists could figure this out) and create a plan B to find out who is behind it all and then destroy the hypnosis. I would also be interested in seeing the world after the hypnosis in other chapters.
Anonymous
2/1/26, 10:50 AM
Any new chapter for this year? We love to hear from you soon author!
2/1/26, 5:12 AM
Love this, it’s a great balance of sex and hypno with a built up. More plz!!!
1/1/26, 1:02 PM
Disagree with some of the comments. Hank clearly has Ash's best interest at heart and is helping his friend see the error of his ways. Ash needs to stop being lazy and stroppy do his homework and show respect to Hank. Then their relationship can move on to the next level. It's always a bit tough breaking-in a new slave but they soon reach a point when they suddenly get it, become compliant and then complicit, then finally realise that the path to true happiness is through serving the master.

2/1/26, 12:18 AM
@[Whitechap_e1](/user/show/219792) It is something I fear and yet want - like at some point it does get non consensual but like I know it is in my best interest though
1/31/26, 10:45 PM
The creative spirit behind this story is effective and hot hot hot. Enjoyed the details of his first morning finding the clothes which are not his.... Great story.
1/31/26, 10:16 PM
Frankly, I feel like I've just stolen something, because I can't believe I got to read this story without paying for it. I can't get over how good this story is, the kind of emotional journey it goes on, and I will definitely be reading this many times in the future. Well done!