Damn this is so hot, my favourite series on the site rn and I love that you're continuing it, I am trying to ration out reading them cuz I love em so much! I think the shame, teasing and discovery coming from Tyrrell's arrival and the chat with coach are all so interesting - it builds the tension, the strain before what we imagine to be Ryan's eventual acceptance and position - without Malakye there it's incredible how tense the locker room feels in a different way. Like at any moment it could become a crazy gang bang but they hold off and just continue to put him in his place - but when Malakye's expert mind and hands are there Ryan is more willing to let go a little piece of his former self, a kinder almost CNC way of turning into a locked up cum dump - both are tantalising and I love seeing you continue the story and flesh out some more details and characters before getting to the sex - keep it up, you're amazing

Dude, this story was exceptional! Porny, over-the-top, exaggerated - but all in the _very best way!_ As mentioned above, there was a very conversational, casual style to this story that really suited it well and made it a really easy read, while still being insanely sexy! Everything from the huge dicks, to the "Latino god", to just the casualness of it all was right up my alley! If I could muster any constructive criticism, the only thing I would recommended is maybe giving it a once over and reviewing the grammar and toning that style you've developed - as sometimes I felt my eyes getting lost in the density of some of the paragraphs or action. But please don't be discouraged, I actually can't wait to see what you'll contribute next - keep up the great work! (And thank you Soren, for sending this story to me. You know exactly what I like! :kissing_heart:)

The next chapter! How I have been waiting for this! I gotta admit, I was getting worried when this chapter would come. Then I saw the word count and then I understood. Its impressive you when complete a chapter of this size. And a new record in a way. Your large ones like this are usually endings. Also, I apologize. I realized that in the comments from the last chapter I failed to read the hint about Violet. Speaking of him, he was always that self-righteous and arrogant asshole. Which was the point. But it wasn't until this chapter he strikes me as one of this smug know-it-alls that some anime have. And it feels so sweet to see them get the beat down they deserve. While I can't deny his value to Hank and to the story, I can't help but wonder if he really deserves this 'second chance' to learn. But I guess I will see later just how humbled he is... Yet he did say something that stuck with me, '_But now I can have that too! I am FREE! Free to enjoy without shame,… so long as my master guides me_!' Ain't this true for us in the 'real' world? It can be difficult to break out of your shell when societal culture can impose self imposed limits as one keeps enforcing the other... This chapter also brought up another question. How will Hank distinguish between his slaves moving forward? Meaning, he solely labels Gold as his hero in practice, and Red (and now Violet) are his..._dogs_? He calls them all 'good boys' and 'slaves' so its more of a question of role I'm curious about. Will Hank still use Red and Violet as heroes on the field; or just Gold? As for the rooftop fight, that was thrilling! Blue put up quite the act to look like the bad guy. I was partly wanting him to get be successful in getting to one of the heroes. If just to covertly relay that he was alright. And I gotta admit, I was really hoping it would have been Freedom. With only his mouth exposed, it would have been _Gold_ if Nick landed a kiss as a means of contact on so many levels! Holding Freedom's head tight in his hands. Perhaps evening giving his rump a good squeeze to bring back old memories. And everyone is watching. Yet, I can't help but shake off that Henry's interference is going to bit them in the preverbal ass so to speak.

Great series. I'm loving it! Hope you finish it! Slight correction - it's 'confidAnt' not 'confidEnt'.

How is that summoning sigil drawn? Asking for a friend…

I love this story. It gets me so hard every time! I really hope you continue it :)

This just gets better and better! I’m loving every moment of the story and can’t wait to see what happens next!

I love this story and I've only seen part 1 because I see you've released a part 2, which I'll be promptly reading. Your writing is so good and you've set the scene so well - I feel like I've gotten a cultural education. Excited to see your other stories!

What a pleasant surprise to see more of this amazingly hot story!! I'd love to continue seeing Simon completely mindfucked to oblivion :P

I really enjoyed this story. Neat writing style too.