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2da
3/6/26, 5:18 PM
This is such a hot story - I really hope you continue it Perhaps the class should take a field trip to a slave processing center. That would provide all sorts of interesting opportunities
3/6/26, 3:52 PM
This was fantastic. I've been checking the site often to see when the next chapter was gonna come out and I was so excited to see it this morning! The main corruption theme is hot as fuck to start with, but focus on muscle growth and himbofication/BEASTification in this chapter made it even better for me.

3/6/26, 4:40 PM
@[Pwrliftermscl](/user/show/941605) Thanks; it was later than I liked, but glad I could get it finished, and I’m very glad you enjoyed 😈
3/6/26, 1:59 PM
Nice chapter - hot

3/6/26, 4:39 PM
@[mutak](/user/show/952269) Thank you!
3/6/26, 10:35 AM
Very happy this story is still going and getting hotter each chapter!

3/6/26, 4:39 PM
@[benelliot](/user/show/909446) Thank you, I’m very glad you enjoyed it! 😈
3/5/26, 11:03 AM
Oh, I am very late to the party but I gotta throw my hats off to you. This is amazing! The whole thing has been hot as fuck. The current ending is a bit of a cliff hanger, but I know what its like when the words dont flow so I would never demand more. But if there ever WERE more. Randomly. Eventually. Surprisingly? I would be HERE for that and love every word.

3/6/26, 3:33 PM
@[Mind Labyrinth](/user/show/910312) I have one chapter completed, but another one is on its way before I move onto the final part.
1/4/26, 7:55 PM
Hot second part. Looking forward to more.

3/6/26, 12:02 PM
@[Drake Nightstorm](/user/show/650184) Thank you! I have been struggling with Part 3, but am hoping I will eventually have the inspiration to finish this series

Anonymous
3/6/26, 3:23 PM
@[Dante2045](/user/show/10050249) I understand the pain.
3/6/26, 9:45 AM
I gave the re-write of Chapter 5 a couple of reads. The story line/character development became quite "dense" and in doing so, took more effort to unravel. Yet, it fits the tone of the other chapters much better. I think you sort of discovered that you had a "crush" on the Bob character. He started out as a Mr. Nice Guy, but you awarded him a lot of space and made him a nice man with self-respect and visible power. (Is there a side of you in him?) Having done that, I think Dell's character had to change and diminish, and to be honest, he became uninteresting from my perspective. No loss. Larson was a hot character from the start. I don't have a clue where you are headed with him now, but it seems kind of fun. I am glad you kept him in uniform. A locker room with powers to change one's person with a wardrobe swap is a clever idea. But you certainly have created a writing challenge for yourself, giving your characters whole new identities in the space of one chapter. You are not afraid of complex story lines. Even when you could get away with "less", you're creating a cast of misfits worthy of a Russian novel. So far, your characters are all enjoying their new lives. And you're playing into a deeply held belief that I have that "clothes make the man" .... or woman as it may be. Push on to the rest of the narrative.

3/6/26, 2:42 PM
@[Body Odor-1](/user/show/10024251) In fact, Bob is the character I identify with the _least_. He started "life" as a throw-away character. I needed someone to give a blowjob, so I slipped into Stench's head, looked up, and at the edge of the firelight, I saw a guy I hadn't thought of in ages. We had high school gym together. He was average height, so I shrank him a bit for the story. When Jill Sobule sang "dumb as a box of hammers/but he's such a handsome guy," that's the guy I pictured. He failed Driver's Ed. He was into weightlifting and was on the baseball team in 9th grade, before his grades dropped below the cutoff for sports. He had shoulder-length dirty blonde hair, a goatee, and--I'm not joking--those bronze-colored pubes I mentioned. Gym lockers were assigned alphabetically, so his was next to mine. But that was high school, where tribal lines were reinforced by course schedules, so He wound up failing out, and said he was joining the Army. I have no clue what happened to him, but since he was the most body-conscious guy in the school and never had a girlfriend (that I heard of), despite being good-looking by the standards of the early-80's, I looked back later and thought he may well have been gay. Since I'm building a fucked-up fantasy world, I thought, "wouldn't it be nice if we could all live together and take care of each other?" So, instead of abandoning Bob at the campfire, Dell (the voice of my maternal instinct) would've wanted to bring Bob along to the garage. From the start, Dell was always meant to be the group's spiritual Grandpa, despite only being a few years older than Stench. I see him as the guy who's had the most life experience, while everyone else was concentrating on their careers. So, while everyone is accepting, Dell's the most understanding. Plus, he's the one with all the wild sex stories. Larsen is based on this hot ginger otter I've seen several times at the local grocery store. And he's always wearing the same tan slack, sheepskin jacket with the collar turned up, and the same Indiana Jones fedora. It's like a uniform. And I'm not joking when I say his short-cropped beard is so dense I don't think you could make an impression if you poked it. When I did the chapter revisions, I thought, "hey, police uniforms made out of leather look hot, so why not?" As for his transformation, the proliferation of really hot trans guys out there made me realize that plumbing was never my issue with women (it's the furlessness). I certainly don't know enough to write a trans character, but why not a man with traditionally-female equipment. I trust people will attack me savagely if I'm getting it wrong.
Mar 5, 2026
3/6/26, 7:31 AM
I'm glad someone took this universe. I hope the next chapters will be longer and more detailed, both in terms of plot and sex scenes.

3/6/26, 2:40 PM
@[Zander-1](/user/show/10015044), I’m glad you enjoyed it. I’m still mapping things out, but there’ll be six chapters. Some might be long, others might be short, but I will try to make them as sexually explicit as possible. 😉
Palm Springs Jonathan
3/5/26, 5:48 PM
OMG, that's one of the best erotic stories I've ever read! Please write more! I'm sitting here with a roaring hardon, wondering if I have enough time to jack it off before getting into the day's chores. I give this story an A+++!

3/6/26, 12:04 PM
@Palm Springs Jonathan Thank you for the kind words! I do have a few other stories on this site which are of a similar vibe- would love to hear your thoughts if you read them. Appreciate the comment!
Dec 31, 2025
2/8/26, 5:43 PM
Great story!!

3/6/26, 12:00 PM
@[Dan25](/user/show/10053172) Thank you!