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9/10/25, 4:10 PM
Good Lord this was amazing. Hopefully Garret's not fully broken but just swept away by the Pheromones. Just slight enough to feel horny and bottom.
9/10/25, 11:43 AM
I think it's so fucking hot that at the traditional post competition pig out fest, everybody at the table, except Vlad and Ali, has been fucking Brian like a cock hungry slut on a the regular! Go Mr J! LOL
9/10/25, 10:38 AM
Hi, the idea is very good, it seems to be written well, but there is something to work on. First, the events happen too quickly and we do not see how the transformation occurs and how the person fights it, whether he understands what is happening to him and tries to resist it. Second: the sex scenes are very short, there are also no longer dialogues between the characters and what they feel after meeting when they have not seen each other for quite a long time.
6/21/24, 10:59 AM
I, for one, don't want to see Brian top. I love that the more muscular and masculine he becomes, the more submissive and slutty he becomes. Even with women. He isn't fucking them because he is a pussy hound out making conquests, but because they want him to fuck them and he complies with their desires. It's as if Sam is somehow re-writing Brian's basic nature, transforming him from a man into an obedient sex slave. I love the series, btw. Each chapter is full of hot sex and submission.

6/23/24, 5:56 PM
@[ControlMe](/user/show/2615973) Thanks for the love. Yeah Mr Johnson has a lot of fun to have, but I don't think he'll ever be a pussy hound

9/10/25, 9:17 AM
@[Todd Mitchell](/user/show/10039362) LOVED all the spanking, (I mean for Brian, tho I wouldn't say no) thanks! Did "Mr. Chan" fuck Brian right after? It was kinda left "open ended". Did Brian show up to the hot tub with bright red cheeks AND a pussy full of cum?

9/10/25, 9:24 AM
@[fegatan13](/user/show/10061933) No, Mr Chan would never fuck one of his boys at work. Not appropriate... and anyway, that might give Brian mixed messages ha ha ha!
6/16/24, 12:40 PM
This story... it is just FANTASTIC! The trio sex at the end of this chapter is just so good. SO GOOD! I love the FUN of the writing and the excitement I feel for Mr Johnson and his new exciting life. THANK YOU for this wonderful story and this fun-filled writing. back to the keyboard!

6/16/24, 1:25 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Oh thank god you liked the last scene, I was banging that one out, while high on poppers and Johnny Castle hetero-porn [not exactly but the life of an erotic writer should surely be allowed some embellishments]. I'm glad you're loving the "fun" too. I'm a great proponent that sex is awesome and no one needs to be drugged, tricked or blackmailed into having it!

I wasnt familiar with Johnny Castle porn... and WOW! He is just writer's material. He is gentle and sensual and his body is beautiful. Write more for me!
6/18/24, 11:50 AM
@[Todd Mitchell](/user/show/10039362)

6/18/24, 12:22 PM
For a straight porn star... yes definitely hot. The Pure Mature videos are so cool

9/10/25, 9:07 AM
@[Todd Mitchell](/user/show/10039362) He's Italian (Birth name: Rocco Santini). Just say'n... LOL

9/10/25, 9:23 AM
@[fegatan13](/user/show/10061933) Born in NJ actually... but I am definitely learning something every day https://the-vague-unsung.fandom.com/wiki/Johnny_Castle
9/9/25, 10:22 AM
I agree with BlindSeer0's comment wholeheartedly. What I will say though is that reading this story kinda feels like being edged. What I mean by that is that the writing is so good at keeping me intrigued about what's gonna happen, that I'm like getting hyped for future story beats that might not even happen. At the same time, the erotica part has taken a back seat to the story, which is fine of course, but it definitely leaves me wanting more 🤭 I can definitely relate to Ollie, wanting to squish some big ol' pecs

9/10/25, 9:16 AM
@[ThomBaws](/user/show/908711) Oh, gosh, that's some lovely praise. I am, hahah, quite familiar with edging for long periods, but this is my first time writing a slow-burn. I prefer quick, down-to-business relationships like Ollie and Mo's. That, of course, only happened because I felt behooved to force some erotica into the first chapter. I intend to stick with it nonetheless and show how such a relationship can be done healthily. I'm debating compressing the next two chapters into one as I don't want to drag things out _too_ much. Plus, there's no point in forcing incident to mark time. It's a journal; sometimes there's nothing to really say! Besides... I have big plans for October. Halloween is going to be very entertaining! Ah, but I've said too much already! I relate to Ollie, too. Most musclemen around here are straight, and I can't exactly go up to a dude and go, "Hey, can I grope your chest for my own sexual gratification? It won't be weird, I promise!" Always glad to see your comments, BTW. I look forward to them.
9/10/25, 7:23 AM
Very nice indeed! But a little more descriptive process of Tony's downfall would've been a blast I think. Anyway I long to read about the next step...
Sep 3, 2025
9/10/25, 7:14 AM
This was better than I expected or could imagined. If this is an actual story series, I cannot wait what the next part will look like! Great job.
9/10/25, 6:12 AM
Original idea, beautiful pacing, and delectable description! What's not to love about this story?! Well perhaps one thing. I tend to take some moral issue with plots involving non-consensual enslavement. Still, in this case consent was freely given by Lord Warrington so i suppose that counts for something. Even more relevant to my own personal acceptance of this enslavement plot was the degree to which it ramped up my own libido and pleasure-filled mind. I could literally feel myself relax into mindlessness unaware of anything except the throbbing of my hard cock, my twitching boi-snatch, my swelling aching testicles ...and of course the whispering instructions on how to assemble ear bud cases.
9/10/25, 6:12 AM
A hot story and an interesting setup