Recent Comments

Anonymous
8/9/19, 4:50 PM
This felt a bit more rapey than normal, not my cup of tea
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
8/9/19, 4:31 PM
keep going, lets see how the town changed
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
8/9/19, 4:31 PM
now lets see how the town is now with the changes
8/9/19, 3:26 PM
This is a fun story and idea. I like how they get a chance to acknowledge the changes and end up leaning into them instead of fighting them. It kind of gives the sense that maybe the focus group was really right about them all along. It'd be neat if they left the house, had another round of changes, came home, and then totally forgot about their lives from before the first change. Anyway, I'm looking forward to what happens next!
Anonymous
8/9/19, 2:35 PM
I really like how and were this is
Bibimbap
8/9/19, 2:15 PM
Oh, fuck!!! great!!! Man, I love this story so much!!!
Anonymous
8/9/19, 2:03 PM
I liked your story but it felt like the mental change happened too quickly after the 2nd shower. Was hoping for more of a struggle but it was instant
Anonymous
8/9/19, 1:08 PM
I would love for Leo to somehow be able to turn the tables on Ty. Hot story so far, please continue!
Anonymous
8/9/19, 12:17 PM
I love stories like these that capture the eroticism of wanting (*longing*) to be more muscular and confident, then pay it off. It's strangely very motivating in my own journey.
malskin
8/9/19, 12:07 PM
am glad to read that the mayor has seen what is happening and fingers crossed Steve comes into line as a good and upstanding hetro citizen of Derryville and maybe the mayor can use him to catch Kevin. He can use Steve to put the chief into line as well. and Steve become more like his father in law in his wondering ways