Recent Comments

8/8/19, 6:17 AM
@BlindSeer0 - Honestly, I had more ideas planned for Christine and Michelle in this story, but as it developed, those ideas got sidelined. They have an important part in this, and when I revisit this at some point to construct a second draft, I hope to give them both fuller roles. Trust me, if anyone on here in interested in screeds, it's me. The ages were a little weird in this, I admit, and it's not clear what's happening when or where. But giving too much detail would spoil the surprise I suppose. As for the pulled punch, you mention it here. I hate the trope that "guy is homophobic because they are gay themselves," and when I started this story, I resolved to avoid it as best I could, but it resolved the sheriff's conflict here in the quickest, neatest, and in some ways most satisfying fashion, so I used it. Initially, I wanted the sheriff caught in some odd liminal space, not so much straight or gay as simply overwhelmingly dominant and sexually fascistic towards everyone, but the story was moving in a different direction, and I let it go where it needed to go. It still works, certainly, and has plenty of impact, but it reduces some of the sheriff's complexity that I wanted to build on.
Anonymous
8/8/19, 5:30 AM
hot
8/8/19, 3:30 AM
This is shaping up to be a good pup story. And I love a good pup story. Looking forward to reading on.
Dio brando
8/8/19, 2:53 AM
Ew.
Anonymous
8/8/19, 2:36 AM
I wonder if there was a follow-up. Would be hot!!!!
Anonymous
8/8/19, 2:19 AM
Cool story!! Keep it coming!!!
8/8/19, 2:10 AM
Gorgeous....lushly constructed, with a reasonable mental turn
Anonymous
8/8/19, 12:34 AM
I hope you add some ridiculously sexy uniforms to the cops, like a sexy spoof of their former authority or some kind of alteration to them. That's a very hot form of humiliation!
M
8/7/19, 11:46 PM
DAMN! Another boner induced awesome chapter! I love the direction you are taking the story. I cant wait for the next one.
Anonymous
8/7/19, 10:27 PM
**Great story and would love it to continue, how far will the former stud fall, will he become addicted to cock**