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8/15/19, 10:15 AM
Isn't this great? I think so, too -- I doubt there's anyone who can recreate my creepy sense of unease, suspense and erotic growth as well rubbrsome can. I know where the story's going and I'm still excited to read it! It is absolutely a wonderful splice of his world mixed with mine. A quick word on [POLLINATION: The Series](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/newStory/show/330) -- feel free to read it yourself -- it was a story that I completely made up as I went along. I almost never do that. Yes, I had a vague idea about overall plot -- I knew what I wanted the latter half of the book to be (not unlike Stephen King's THE STAND), but I had a LONG way to go before I got to that stuff. Interestingly, I'd just gotten to the brink of what I'd intended to do when I stopped writing it. It was turning into a major novel -- and I hadn't even STARTED the stuff I'd "plotted" -- when I lost the energy for it. But the exercise of following the vines as the Pollination took place really fascinated me, this guy led to this guy led to this guy, etc. and each branch kept blooming and growing in its own unique direction -- and I just let it. I have often considered jumping back in the garden and finishing the novel -- I'm considering it right now, as a matter of fact -- but I believe rubbrsome's take will satisfy us all for a while. This is good stuff, friends -- enjoy the ride! Thank you thank you thank you thank you for writing it!!!!!!
Rawshock
8/15/19, 8:12 AM
I'm loving this series! You do an excellent job of writing the old and new characters, the mental and reality changes, the power dynamics, and of course the sex scenes, it's a great twist compared to a lot of the stories here that they're actually deeply in love through the whole thing, and it's just similar enough to a certain would-be presidential gay couple in real life to be familiar and fun but still different enough to be original and fresh and not just a parody. So good that I honestly want to read it again but from Parker's perspective too. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter, keep up the good work!
Anonymous
8/15/19, 7:05 AM
update please. :(
8/15/19, 7:01 AM
Bibimbap, sorry it's taking so long. Been crazy busy. I have a new chapter in the works as we speak that will introduce two new characters. I have a lot planned for this story. :)
Bluedude
8/15/19, 5:43 AM
very hot! I hope ya do more.
8/15/19, 5:34 AM
It was the most impressive novel I read recently. Thank you so much. I'd like to see Steve and Kevin's story after this someday. I'm curious about Steve's life after Steve's father disappears... And I wonder what "death" looks like in this town. Maybe they will be bound to this town even after their deaths...?
Aug 13, 2019
Anonymous
8/15/19, 3:58 AM
Wow that's dark. Really pulling my feelings. I just want Declan to be happy...
8/15/19, 3:40 AM
I remember the bikers from the first story. Spreading their seed along the highways. Converting 'weekend bikers' to expand their gang. I hope we get to see them again!
Stephen
8/15/19, 3:37 AM
What a great story line. Vivid details. You are on a great beginning. Thank you.
8/15/19, 3:34 AM
nycboot You are exactly right. If you go back to Pollination (The Series), there are only two instances in that entire story where the symbiosis is described. And it's interesting that you mention the film Jaws. I think our imaginations are so good in filling in the missing details. Plus it keeps the audience hungry for more. So yes, my intention with the first chapter was to start off this series with a rocket blast. I want to show something fresh and yet familiar at the same time. I want the story to progress logically with the idea: how would the country respond after the first pollination. So expect the story to slow down a bit. I got to set up my dominoes now.