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QueerBoi
3/5/26, 4:22 PM
Outstanding chapter, Sir. More please.
2/28/26, 1:28 PM
Don't change it for me. I'm pretty much full of shit. Just push ahead. I just thought that YOUR head might have not been in that chapter. Thanks for taking the time to write.

2/28/26, 1:57 PM
@[Body Odor](/user/show/962263) Well, you should know by now that the Queers think shit is a normal fact of life and nothing to be shied away from. :wink: I’m new to writing and just a bit surprised that you saw through me. Chapter 5 _does_ read as rushed, as I read back through it. At this point Bob/Meatsack _is_ an ancillary character. I did not give him much thought, so I did not write much. But he deserves better than to be treated as disposable. We are all the main characters in our own story, after all. I did not step inside his (somewhat empty, if I’m to be honest) head, but I really should try. Who knows what we’ll find inside there? The next chapter is already in the publication pipeline and the one after that is fully-written in my head and 3/4 of the way typed out. So I have some time to spare.

3/5/26, 2:14 PM
@[Body Odor](/user/show/962263) I took another pass through Chapter 5 and it's up now. I slowed down the first two transformations and discovered a couple of changes to Bob & Dell that I hadn't noticed the first time around, with Bob's leading to a bit of fun. Larsen's transformation is unchanged, except for a change of outfit that I thought was more fitting. If you have time, give it a read-through and let me know what you think. Thanks.
3/5/26, 2:08 PM
...when he spit into Liam's eager mouth while he was 10 inches deep into him, that was the best erotic writing I have ever experienced. It was just like a masterpiece. You are so incredibly good at storytelling and ... DANG... that moment was unique, unexpected, and so intense for me. I wish Liam would let Noah be Noah. Why is he pushing him to be more expressive? it bugs me. Noah is Noah and frankly it works perfectly. Oh gosh... I am ALL IN on this story.
3/5/26, 11:03 AM
Oh, I am very late to the party but I gotta throw my hats off to you. This is amazing! The whole thing has been hot as fuck. The current ending is a bit of a cliff hanger, but I know what its like when the words dont flow so I would never demand more. But if there ever WERE more. Randomly. Eventually. Surprisingly? I would be HERE for that and love every word.
Anonymous
3/5/26, 12:49 AM
We want more!!!

3/5/26, 9:59 AM
@Anonymous 😃 Really glad you like it. This is intended as a one-off, but it certainly leaves things open for other transformations I could come back to. I have a few other things I'm working on, first, though, that I hope you'll like, too.
3/5/26, 8:52 AM
I agree that it splits into 3 and 1 of them comes find me ASAP.
Anonymous
3/5/26, 4:08 AM
Hope for more chapters
Anonymous
3/5/26, 3:48 AM
Hope for more chapters coming!
Anonymous
3/5/26, 2:50 AM
Hope for more chapters!
3/5/26, 2:32 AM
One of the most erotic stories I've read in a long time. I would like to hear the story about how the Jock got his abilities.