Recent Comments

hunter_c_wolfe@hotmail.com
4/28/20, 12:57 AM
That is what I call great salesmanship. When can I schedule an appointment with him?
4/28/20, 12:38 AM
Dude. Loved it. Especially the part where Josh is starting to figure out that he feels different, but can't quite pin down how.
Swizzington
4/28/20, 12:11 AM
Ugh, I shouldn't have said anything!! I *thought* I was making the finishing touches to the final chapter, and yet, somehow, I've gone and written two more chapters! It will come very soon, I promise! In the meantime, I recommend Jaybird's new story: 'Room 609'. It's great!
4/27/20, 11:43 PM
Yes!!! I love blankface hypno lol. Can't wait to read more!
EntrancedGay92
4/27/20, 11:41 PM
Thank you! This is the beginning of a few chapters 😊
4/27/20, 11:27 PM
I can't believe how much I am turned on by these stories...god I want some daddy dick
HypnoAJL
4/27/20, 10:47 PM
Keep this kind of stuff coming! It's great!
Martin
4/27/20, 10:22 PM
The wrong order of the stories were my mistake, I'm sorry for that. It's fixed now, and all the parts are published now, too!
Anonymous
4/27/20, 10:18 PM
Great entrapment idea. Nice writing style. All in all you’re off to a great start. Really hope there’s more to come though, cos this cuts the story off faaaaar too soon!
4/27/20, 10:02 PM
Cyclops, It's your story and as long as you are happy with it that's all that matters. The scores are somewhat arbitrary so don't focus on that; I know that I got good scores for chapter 2 of my story and didn't for chapter 4, but it didn't matter to me as I know the story I want to tell and I'm telling it. So far you've been doing an excellent job as I quickly open the latest chapter whenever you put it up; if you need some encouragement about continuing, please use that to encourage yourself and keep writing. Please know that I at least enjoy your work and will be waiting for it whenever you put it up and I'll look forward to the story wherever you go with it.