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2/9/26, 5:13 PM
Really enjoyed it, worthy follow-up!. I put a MUCH longer review on the Ao3 version.
2/9/26, 5:05 PM
Hi
2/9/26, 4:28 PM
Thanks :)
2/8/26, 10:53 PM
Hank is right. Those boys really want it as much as they deny it. That taunting power play Hank did with Henry in front of Nick was bold too. And it felt like it would have worked too if he had a bit more time in snagging Nick. Maybe tempting him with a new rubber suit and continuing what would have happened at his store. And Gold is back! Remaking himself again is impressive. But can he really blame Hank? He largely did that to himself. But the big question is who is he altering his orders for? Gold still seems like he would follow Hank still if he can. Though with Hank now under Nick's thumb that will be an interesting twist. Yet this does leave a lot to be cleaned up. Henry. Cameron. Lee and Joe. The drones. Feels like a great time for H-3 to make a sudden appearance.

2/9/26, 2:54 AM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) Thank you! :) I _hope_ to have almost all of these things cleaned up next time (or, at least, pointed towards their conclusions). And, you're right,... **H-3** has been awfully quiet,... _almost too quiet,..._

2/9/26, 4:24 PM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) I look forward to it. Thank you for making this such a saga!
2/9/26, 3:56 PM
Very nice idea!
1/27/26, 2:55 PM
Update for those who may be interested in more chapters! I have not given up on this project of mine, I’ve just had some life stuff in the way plus my laptop stopped working and I much prefer to be able to sit down at my desk and write on my laptop. So yes, currently I don’t have a proper way to sit down and write more chapters. BUT MORE CHAPTERS ARE COMING!!! Maybe not soon, but eventually, I’m not gonna let this one go unfinished like a lot of these unfinished stories on here. I will also be working on improving my writing skills in the meantime. I do apologize that it may take more time than any of us would like it to, trust me. But I’m gonna see this one through to the end. ♠️

2/9/26, 3:15 PM
@[♠️TheWorldOfBNWO♠️](/user/show/697694) Love you!
2/9/26, 2:30 PM
What are you enjoying about the story the most? Let me know in the comments!
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2/8/26, 11:28 AM
Ok fine I like Chris! Chapter did a very good job of hunanising them both. Their strengths and flaws on display. An oversight to send him into a sex shop on his own maybe, but also a valid way of letting a sub have agency so I adored it. My assumption was a pup mask etc to be able to hide. On that note chapter hit a little too close to home haha. The feelings of being boring/not submissive enough. I'd argue perhaps one of the more important chapters so far.

2/9/26, 12:14 PM
@Anonymous Yay! Glad Chris managed to win you over! Chris definitely realised afterwards that the task was a step in the wrong direction, at least for now. As cocky and self-assured as he is, he’s just a guy at the end of the day. And yeah, I wanted to strike a different tone with this chapter after the more lighthearted one prior. I hope folks can still enjoy it either way. As always, thanks so much for the feedback!
2/8/26, 1:20 PM
Absolutely beautiful chapter!

2/9/26, 12:10 PM
@[Cockaddickeddan](/user/show/995647) Thanks so much! Xxx
2/9/26, 6:50 AM
This story is amazing, damn having a hive mind and the slime controlling those bodies are really turning my libido on!