Recent Comments

9/1/25, 2:08 AM
Dude, this story was exceptional! Porny, over-the-top, exaggerated - but all in the _very best way!_ As mentioned above, there was a very conversational, casual style to this story that really suited it well and made it a really easy read, while still being insanely sexy! Everything from the huge dicks, to the "Latino god", to just the casualness of it all was right up my alley! If I could muster any constructive criticism, the only thing I would recommended is maybe giving it a once over and reviewing the grammar and toning that style you've developed - as sometimes I felt my eyes getting lost in the density of some of the paragraphs or action. But please don't be discouraged, I actually can't wait to see what you'll contribute next - keep up the great work! (And thank you Soren, for sending this story to me. You know exactly what I like! :kissing_heart:)

9/6/25, 11:27 PM
@[Franco Apollo](/user/show/10029736) Thanks so much man for the comments and for the writing advice. Can always use feedback. Glad you enjoyed. Cheers!
8/30/25, 2:22 PM
This was hot as fuck. Classic revenge-on-bully story, and I enjoyed the degradation aspects (I actually added that tag even though it doesn’t exist because for Collar it’s very important that it exists lol). I really enjoyed your conversational style in this. It had just the right mix of casual chatter and eloquence. Your writer instincts are a very solid base off which to hone your craft if you so desire (though it already delivered this story very effectively). I’m looking forward to seeing more stories from you. This type of vibe and story is my bread and butter. (As a personal aside, I’m in love with cum and definitely would have enjoyed more, uh, volume. Love unrealistic levels of the stuff, but I’m also crazy, so.)

9/6/25, 11:25 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) We all have our thing lol. You probably guessed I love a relentless power top destroying a submissive bottom. Very hot. Glad you enjoyed and appreciate the comments
8/29/25, 1:52 AM
Hot story I liked everything including the length of the story and the text itself with the plot. I hope to see more stories from you in the future)

9/6/25, 11:23 PM
@[Zander-1](/user/show/10015044) Glad you liked it. I'll post something new soon
9/6/25, 10:04 PM
This chapter is so hot. Looking forward for the new week. I wonders whos pov are we getting next. And what story building are we getting next.
9/6/25, 9:06 PM
Holy shit, yes. Muscle worship, happy obedience, breeding fixation… this one got me good. Thanks for sharing.
9/6/25, 8:59 PM
This was great! Hot and pervy, in the very best way! Looking forward to see how you'll expound on the exhibitionist angle in other works. Great work!
9/6/25, 5:33 PM
Is there anywhere i can read the rest?
9/6/25, 5:21 PM
So every time Harry fucks someone, Tommy will feel it in his muscle bubble jock pussy? Cool! I originally thought it mean't that at 9:45 Harry had struck out and that Tina was sending Harry home with blue balls. Either way if Harry is thinking of Tommy while he's out on a date, or even after he's fucked someone, then the attraction is mutual. REALLY hope there's another chapter coming soon. Would be really hot to finally see Harry give Tommy the pounding of both their lives. Rather than a curse or a revenge spell, that creepy goth girl may have actually granted these boys their wish. Awww...
GayMan999
9/5/25, 11:27 PM
This was great, I wish it was continued.

9/6/25, 5:07 PM
@[GayMan999](/user/show/2290036) Glad you liked it! While this specific story doesn't have a part two, I've used the universe in a few others. As far as what's posted on this site, "Not What You Asked For" is another one that features some Seductra aftermath.
Anonymous
9/6/25, 4:14 PM
Loved this can't wait for more!! Lance really helps his friends in his own way