Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/10/25, 12:31 AM
This has been one of my favourite reads on here. I’m very excited to see more! I really like your writing style and the complexity of emotions that he’s feeling, it’s honestly been eye opening and thank you for your candour around RSD struggles it gave me things to reflect on personally. The last few chapters truly had my heart strings in a knot was teary eyed for most of them, the end here has been a nice diversion from that. I’m very excited to see how you develop the story following this especially with the stalker and anonymous man being brought into the foreground a little more!

12/15/25, 7:35 PM
@Anonymous One of your favorites? Aaaahhh, come off anon so I can thank you properly! What a feather in my cap. :) I appreciate that my story has helped you personally, especially as RSD is such a pain to deal with. I had someone I considered a friend get really rude about things related to this story the other day, so I said I'd stop mentioning it. And he said, "Thank goodness, I was afraid I'd have to hear about your story again." Which, man, that hurt... I knew it was his problem; no fault of mine. But my brain still said, "Maybe you should take a break from your creative projects for a while. It'd probably be better." Thankfully, I was able to identify this as nonsense from the jump. Anyway... The stalker plot is... admittedly not going to be some big thing. That's solved very early next chapter. Though it's not who you might expect! And I figured out the Anonymous Man's whole deal recently while chatting with a close friend. I knew he was important, I knew I wanted him in, but couldn't quite piece it together. I'd gone over a few different notions since introducing him. I'll go over those in a footnote when the reveal happens... provided I remember to! Hahah. :P
Anonymous
12/10/25, 4:06 AM
This was such an amazing chapter and I loved reading it. You wove the main plots all happening at once together so well!

12/15/25, 7:27 PM
@Anonymous That's so kind of you to say! People who've edited stuff I wrote under my real name have noted that my knack for that. So it's nice to hear it here, too. LOL
12/15/25, 7:15 PM
I am always excited to see a new chapter! Can’t wait to see how the story will evolve.

12/15/25, 7:26 PM
@[Dregen](/user/show/1065159) Thank you! I have plenty of twists, turns, and upsets planned, believe you me! Hoping to have the next part posted quicker.
12/7/25, 10:20 AM
I am loving this and holding my breath for the next instalment.

12/15/25, 7:25 PM
@[BeastOz](/user/show/918544) Well, don't pass out. Would hate to lose you! Next installment is proceeding apace, I can assure you. Always nice to see you in the comments! (I tried to reply to this earlier, but for some reason it logged me out and posted the comment anonymously! Strange.)
12/15/25, 7:59 AM
Haha it's a pretty unique idea! I enjoyed it! Hope to see more stuff 😉

12/15/25, 4:44 PM
@[Whisperlouder](/user/show/2186797) Glad you enjoyed it. Working on more chapters right now.
12/15/25, 2:34 PM
That hit really hard I feel so bad for Elijah I hope he gets a happy ending :(
Dec 15, 2025
12/15/25, 2:31 PM
interesting concept. i enjoyed the story so far love to see some brawny paladins fall and become corrupt with pleasure in the future.
Dec 15, 2025
Anonymous
12/15/25, 1:56 PM
Wildly hot story, great work! Can’t wait for the next chapter to see what happens when they go meet Vinnie.
Zander
12/14/25, 11:39 PM
The story is good , but in terms of plot, it's very illogical (I mean, the heavens wouldn't leave such a powerful demon alone and wouldn't let him grow stronger by enslaving people) and a bit stupid, unfortunately. But you conveyed the corruption quite well, even though everything happened very quickly, and if you close your eyes to the plot holes, everything is written quite decently for a single player. Для меня 6/10

12/15/25, 8:13 AM
@Zander It seems this may be the first fictional story you've ever read in your life! So let me explain - it's not real life! It is a fantasy and therefore it does not need to conform to reality. Haha in fact, if you want stories that conform to the real world then this site really isn't the place for you! Haha I don't think calling people's stories stupid is acceptable - but since your comment was even more stupid - we'll call it evens! Also - how do you know what the heavens would do!
12/15/25, 6:43 AM
@hypnoslut Thanks so much for a great story! Like the special boys in the story, i don't always know exactly what's happening. Somehow though that just feels like my brain fog that prevents some things from coming into focus. On a more technical note i suggest that you at the least run your text through a grammar and spelling check. Doing that will not unfortunately find many of the errors since real words are not used in the right places. For those you might need a real copy-editor (or perhaps at this point a really advanced AI?). An example i remember offhand is the confusion between "your" and "you're". Another is the words "an" and "and" a few times showing up where the other word should be. There are other places where a word necessary so the sentence would make sense was missing, or an extra word showed up. I am guessing that you love to bring your fantasies to life, but don't enjoy doing any serious review for copy-editing. If that's the case, i understand. Don't worry. The odd sentence had to be read a couple of times to make sense of it, but it was certainly not enough of an issue to stop me from pushing on to find out what happens next! Speaking of which, i am now off to get myself absorbed into the next chapter! [Using the word "absorbed" in that context is an unusual use of the word, but it does seem to fit the feeling I get from my deep enjoyment of the story. If it didn't seem to work for the rest of you in the same way, try reading the sentence again or check out the definition of "poetic license"! ;) i really gotta move on to the next chapter!]