Recent Comments

1/8/21, 2:31 AM
INCREDIBLE! You should be so proud of this story! The muscle growth sequence was insanely hot, especially with the gradual mental change to cockiness. And then seeing Robert and Jordan get pumped up and dumbed down was the icing on the (beef)cake. Well done!
1/8/21, 1:34 AM
Very nicely done!
1/8/21, 1:13 AM
@Anon Interesting. I would have to think about how that could be formatted as a competition or punishment scenario. @Hypno-Tales Thanks man! Nice to know Nate has a fan 😉😜 haha
1/8/21, 12:31 AM
Interesting show xD Glad Nate was able to stay a little longer :)
Anonymous
1/7/21, 11:41 PM
Ohhh, I'd love to see anything related to the more times they come the more they grow
1/7/21, 10:53 PM
Ready for the next chapter!
Daniel
1/7/21, 10:31 PM
Reminded me off an episode of THE TWILIGHT ZONE I.J.S.
Daniel
1/7/21, 10:16 PM
Agree with EAG. I.J.S.
Daniel
1/7/21, 10:07 PM
Getting HOTTER !! I.J.S.
1/7/21, 10:06 PM
@Oblgatonym thank you for all the lovely comments. Based on your feedback I decided to remove the horror tag because I decided that the scariness of this one part is adequately covered by the fairytale tag. After all plenty of scary things happen in fairy tales. As to Comet's past, well, I guess you'll just have to wait and find out if I address that or not in the upcoming chapters.